I like this one the best out of this particular design. I would make the lines darker above and below the slogan... However, as a group we have decided upon the design rated 1 at this point. This has not been an easy choice as personally, I really like several of your designs and I have truly appreciated your verbal... or written.. interaction. I think that is important as well. I want to personally thank you for your continued and dedicated effort to meet my requests. This is exactly what made the decision difficult! I wish you the very, very best in future competitions. I am sure you win many and will win many more! Thanks!
Please check revisions and let me know your thoughts about them please. I´ve done also a subtle revision to the emblem #251 , only simple adjustments on alignments, sizes, so the design is more balance to view. I like it better also with the slogan this way, thanks for the tips.
Yes i also think the hashtag it´s the problem, if i remove them, the comment system works better in some cases.
Again feel free to ask if you need changes dear Donald. Any more suggestions you have are welcome.
Please check revisions and let me know what do you think of them.
Sometimes hit the button "post comment" and i have to cut my comment to you. Make a refresh on the page hitting F5 and them i copy paste the comment again, it´s someking of bug in the comment area.
Also, I think you can see the other designs now. Please look at the gold in the one currently rated 1, can you make the gold in this designs similar in color? Thanks!
I was gona sleep, but i saw in time your comment. I worked revisions based on them, please check the solutions i´ve found. About the embroidery, this one is possible, i´ve already done something with rays for a client, he share with me the final result of the embroidery and was good. And if i do the treatment i´ve gave to entry #230, the embroidery will be good.
I will be back again tomorrow because here is really late donald, i will need to sleep. So feel free to send more suggestions They will be always welcome, i can work on them tomorrow. Hope you like my new revisions.
I like this one - can you make the slogan letters a bit larger and fit? Also, can you try making the lines above and below the slogan a copper-gold color? Just want to compare - thanks!
I´ve worked revisions for your consideration based on your feedback. Please check them and let me know what do you think. I will be back again at the end of the night. I have a concert with the girl, but i will be back again at night full power, i´m fast review my design, so having other good ideias i will develop if needed. Suggestions you may have are always welcome.
I like this one even though it is not the colors we originally spoke about. can you change to the slogan vice "Rock Air Maintenance" and make it a bit easier to read. Also, get rid of the fade across the "RAM" Thanks!
Get some rest as I want to push you when you wake. Keep in mind I am in the East African Time zone at the moment - should be about 3 hours ahead of you I believe - you are a finalist and want to see how you compete now - keep up the good work! Thanks!
Like this one as well - change the Slogan to black lettering and remove the italicization from the slogan only... or maybe one with italicization and one without? Also, can you make the land masses a bit darker - hard to see them. Thanks!
OK, getting closer, but still need a deeper black - jet black for the "RAM" and the land masses on the globe - Change the slogan letters to black as well. Thanks!
Let me know your thoughts and of the guys also. Tomorrow i will be back again dear Donald. Like i said in my other comment to you, it´s a little late here 5 am. I´m a little sleepy rigth now.
But tomorrow i will be back to you if you want to continue working with me do not worrie.
Aditional feedback and suggestions are welcome for sure. Thank you very much.
Keep the "RAM" Italicized - it was the slogan I wanted to remove the italicization. Also, make the slogan black lettering - and the font possibly bold. Thanks!
I like this and the contrast I see in 186. On the with background the gold is a bit faded - can you put a very, very thin black line around the gold? Also, do something to make it easier to see the stars - they may need to be black and the "Since 2016" is difficult to see. Thanks!
Hope you´re fine. Nice to meet you. I´m glad you like some of my proposals.
My internet is not the best today also. Okay i´ve read all your amazing feedback. And i´ve made revisions for your appreciation. Please check them and let me know what do you think please.
I will probably sleep now, because in Portugal is 5 am. But i will be back again tomorrow and can work on more revisions if needed.
So if you need changes just ask me. Feel free please. Your feedback will be always welcome.
One other thing I forgot to mention was that we want to stay away from dark backgrounds, but like to see them as they help in seeing what the logo looks like on a dark background. This one I like, but would like the slogan vice "Rock Air Maintenance and with a white background. Change the white areas to black - thanks!
This one is more appealing than 169-172, but need the black and gold theme. Hard to see some of the lettering as well. I like the shading effect. Thanks!
I like this one, but need to change the colors and change to the slogan vice "Rock Air Maintenance" Please make it easier to see the slogan. Work on this one as it is appealing. Thanks!
This one in particular - I like the globe - make the gold glossy/shiny and more yellowish. Use the gold you have now to put a line above and below the slogan (when you change to that) and make the slogan black letters and don't italicize. I am inclined to request the land masses on the globe to be darker, but let me know your thoughts. Thanks!
JQ, you are spitting these out faster than I can get my browser to refresh in Africa... well that may be a bad example as the bandwidth can get pretty slow at times:). So, I am trying to devour all of your designs - I will give some basic feedback for all of them. 1. Use Black and Gold - and for the gold try to use a glossy/shiny yellowish gold - group has gravitated this way. Don't use "Rock Air Maintenance" use the slogan in its place - make the slogan all Caps and black - be a rebel if you like as you designers see things we cannot at times and it does change our viewpoint. Those are the basics. I will try to give specific feedback on your other designs to include this one - thanks for your work!
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I appreciate your comment. Thank you very much.
It was a pleasure working with you.
Wish you the best of luck with the new logo. And a great 2016 ( :
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks for all the feedback.
Please check revisions and let me know your thoughts about them please. I´ve done also a subtle revision to the emblem #251 , only simple adjustments on alignments, sizes, so the design is more balance to view. I like it better also with the slogan this way, thanks for the tips.
Yes i also think the hashtag it´s the problem, if i remove them, the comment system works better in some cases.
Again feel free to ask if you need changes dear Donald. Any more suggestions you have are welcome.
Thank you very much.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks again for all the great feedback and tips.
Please check revisions and let me know what do you think of them.
Sometimes hit the button "post comment" and i have to cut my comment to you. Make a refresh on the page hitting F5 and them i copy paste the comment again, it´s someking of bug in the comment area.
I will have to leave now, but i will be back again at 10 pm more or less.
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Feel free to ask for changes and send yours recomendations if needed. They will be welcome.
Thank you very much.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks for all the feedback again.
I was gona sleep, but i saw in time your comment. I worked revisions based on them, please check the solutions i´ve found. About the embroidery, this one is possible, i´ve already done something with rays for a client, he share with me the final result of the embroidery and was good. And if i do the treatment i´ve gave to entry #230, the embroidery will be good.
I will be back again tomorrow because here is really late donald, i will need to sleep. So feel free to send more suggestions They will be always welcome, i can work on them tomorrow. Hope you like my new revisions.
Thank you very much.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks you very much for the great feedback.
I´ve worked revisions for your consideration based on your feedback. Please check them and let me know what do you think. I will be back again at the end of the night. I have a concert with the girl, but i will be back again at night full power, i´m fast review my design, so having other good ideias i will develop if needed. Suggestions you may have are always welcome.
This is my timezone btw http://www.timeanddate.com/worldclock/portugal/porto
In case you want to give opportunity to another designer while i´m away feel free please. I will be back maybe at 1 am again.
Thank you very much.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Thanks so much for all the feedback. You´re fast!!
Probably now i will sleep. So if you want to give a chance to another designers feel free. Because i will just be back tomorrow at afternoon.
Again anything else you may need just let me know. I can revise the logo again tomorrow. Feel free please.
Thank you again.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Let me know your thoughts and of the guys also. Tomorrow i will be back again dear Donald. Like i said in my other comment to you, it´s a little late here 5 am. I´m a little sleepy rigth now.
But tomorrow i will be back to you if you want to continue working with me do not worrie.
Aditional feedback and suggestions are welcome for sure. Thank you very much.
Kindly Regards,
João
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Hope you´re fine. Nice to meet you. I´m glad you like some of my proposals.
My internet is not the best today also. Okay i´ve read all your amazing feedback. And i´ve made revisions for your appreciation. Please check them and let me know what do you think please.
I will probably sleep now, because in Portugal is 5 am. But i will be back again tomorrow and can work on more revisions if needed.
So if you need changes just ask me. Feel free please. Your feedback will be always welcome.
Thank you very much.
Kindly Regards,
João
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