Factory Direct DentalLogo Design Contest

This is creative. I think I would prefer if the "tag" was a solid color.

how about this?
please check and give me feedback.

thanks,

Unfortunately this logo is too colorful and futuristic looking.

Some people are saying that the N looks like X too. Not sure if you can keep the percentage sign concept while also distinguishing it from an X.

One of our brand fonts is Pacifico, if you want to try another version with this font. Not every word needs to be Pacifico, maybe just one.
https://fonts.google.com/specimen/Pacifico

Thanks for your submission! I like the concept of having the percentage sign for the N, and because our brand is about offering the basics at rock-bottom pricing, I also like the minimalist style of the E and A.

Could you try more variations with different or varying color? Maybe also try changing up the "factory direct" font and alignment.

I think the logo is a good concept but needs to be refined somehow. I will try to think about this and give more feedback tomorrow.

any suggestion?

how about this?