F.O.C.U.S.Logo Design Contest

I love that one will be considering the finalists all week ... Thank you will be conducting surveys with co workers and my apparel people love the result..

with submarines fonts..

Thank you so much

Hello Dear, I'm working according to your instruction....Thank you!

Just ideas but going for 3D look that stands out thank you

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I think blowing up just letters will help and more shadowing check out yellow submarines fonts I really like those you are getting very close thank you

This is best one so far see comment on#45 and maybe see what it looks like mismatching colors like make f blue etc anything to make it stand out more or blow up font bigger with lots more shadow and contrast for that fake 3D look! Awesome

I like it a lot now it just needs more contrast so it stands out on apparel maybe enlarge just the letters and pull them forward so it appears they are in front of the rainbow with 3D look I love it and even bigger and blacker and magnifying glass handle and circle

I like this can you do a simpler magnifying glass and remove black background on words

I'm still working for you, Thanks!...

The spectrum should have soft edges dripping into next color no white in between . And magnifying glass needs to be bigger and bolder it's got to stand out on clothes and hats sorry it is very hard to share a vision I'm trying to express myself but this is rough and I'm looking for elongated shadow fonts like your shadow that grows at angle as sun goes down

Ok, revision will upload soon...

Nice but want more brighter magnifying glass and only one ray of white light going through it and no black lines in the rainbow out the back. Sorry it's tough to give feedback with texts wish I could show you I would like font focus to look like growing shadows on the floor like when you see your elongated shadow when sun is going down

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Thanks so much I know I'm throwing a lot at you I appreciate it very much!!

I'm trying... Thank you!

Or if you can make the actual rays of light form the letters like shadows on a sidewalk

Awesome but need simpler black and white magnifying glass with maybe white on inside of mgnifying glass .and only one ray of white lite being refracted and lighter lettering to contrast maybe even white. It's getting there thx and f red o yellow c green u blue s purple

Thanks for feedback ! I'll upload revision soon according to your instruction.

Need white light coming into magnifying glass then being refracted as colored focus like shadows on sidewalk when sun is going down it creates long tall shadows so font will be even with magnifying glass but grow higher like shadows thxx

The letters are the rays of light if you can do that

It's gonna be on apparel so it's got to be lighter im thinking pink Floyd dark side of the moon with magnifying glass instead of pyramid and long shadowy letters you are very close thank you

Please, feel free to suggest, Thanks!