Entry #28 - Would like to see a little more definition to the loop. Would also like to see different fonts for the text that are less rounded off and have more movement. Black is also a little stark. Perhaps try it in another color.
Entry #29 - Would like to see this in another color scheme. Do not like the red loop on the black background. White background is preferable. Font is also too rounded and stagnant. Would like to see another font that has more movement and angle.