#55 and #56 don't look quite as nice as #23 and #49. Here's what I would like to see:
a) Please brighten the lettering color slightly. #23 seems to be more white while all subsequent designs were more gray. I prefer the lighter coloring of #23.
b) Please try an 'edgier' font like Scriptina for the name, almost like a signature. I think you could ignore symmetry with the name if you treat it like a signature, like I wrote it right on the logo. If you look at design
#59 by rapunzel, that is a good font for "Jimmie Malone" or something similar.