#7: I like the way this spiral and its coloring is a bold visual, but somehow doesn't look tornadic/chaotic, etc. Now that I see the red, I don't like it so much. Could you try it with green? ...perhaps a color close to one or more of the greens in my photo? http://www.evolutionscounseling.com/Home/about Also, could you change the "Counseling & Consulting" to "Work Life. Personal Life. One Life."? And what about trying it with EVOLUTIONS in black or an even darker gray?
Thanks for #37! It is getting good feedback from friends and colleagues. Could you make the spiral more like the one in #7? It seems slower and more controlled. I also prefer the direction of the spiral in #7: it goes up and leads into the company name. Could you try a different color of green? I like deeper coloring: both earthy warm ones and vibrant jewel tones.
Glad you made it to Top 5! Your design is closest to the one I had originally envisioned. I think the only changes left will be related to color. Could you add to #51 some strands that are deeper and darker green(s) - basically adding a gradient color scheme to the spiral?
Thanks, herein the updated color for your review #83. I'm signing off now for the day, please leave any feedback that you may have and I'll follow up tomorrow morning (GMT+8)..
You are my #1 right now and I may make the final decision soon. I have a few more requests.
I love the colors in the graphic! Can you simplify the graphic a bit by either taking out a few of the strands and/or blunting the ends like in #7?
Can you make the font easier to read by: 1. adding serifs to EVOLUTIONS 2. expanding the spacing of EVOLUTIONS (which also will make more room for Work Life. Personal Life. One Life.) 3. making Work Life, etc. bigger and/or darker - we could see if a dark green or a green gray or a gray would make it more readable.
Another idea for Work Life, etc. is to use gray for the letters and instead of periods in between use a green dash -, hyphen --, tilde ~, or a stylized version of a connector like that which matches the strands in the graphic. The green connectors could be all the same color or move from a lighter green to a darker, then even darker green.
If you could do these two things, I'll be ready to get friends' feedback and decide: 1) Flip the green mark between the Work Life, etc. horizontal so that the mark goes from light to dark. I think it would be okay if it touches the letters. 2) Create another version that keeps everything the same except - make the Work Life, etc. font greenish-gray and use periods.
Herein the variations as suggested for your review: #108 - horizontal green mark from light to dark #109 - periods in the center between words, in greenish-gray #110 - regular period at the end of each word, from light green to dark green
Feel free to let me know if you have any other comment, I'll work on it :)