Esquire Property ManagementLogo Design Contest

You're welcome and thank you for the nice words. Your suggestions played a big role on the final look though. It wouldn't have looked as good otherwise.

Love it. Thank you for your prompt revisions and I especially appreciate the candid opinions you had on the suggestions I made--especially when you disagreed artistically on them. I think you truly captured her image and appeal...and you brought together the theme I was looking to develop. Thank you.

you are right...she looks like the head of a snake.

Done with everything but the shoulder symmetry, which would defeat the whole purpose of everything we worked on for the last three days. There is no shoulder symmetry because her body is not facing the viewer 100%. If her body was facing the viewer, we wouldn't be able to have that depth/3d look of her rack.

All blocks. For what it's worth, i don't like it. The woman is barely visible and that should be the main focal point of the whole shirt.

One buddy liked the block E so much that he suggested seeing what it would like like with the ESQUIRE spelled out with all blocks like that....getting rid of the red esquire.

I surveyed some friends...They say the curve for the bossom looks like a bolt on...doesn't look like a natural slope...it's too high up...perhaps it should hang a bit lower with a bigger rack...and they thought there may need to be shoulder symmetry somehow....they also though we may need a neck detail of sorts on our left side of the neck...maybe a collarbone like following into the shoulder...or perhaps the hair could drape down to accent the neck like on the left side?

Thank you. I love it. I think it captures what I was looking for in the T-shirt design. I'll pass the image around and see if there are any final touches...but I agree that it is good that there are no hats or gloves for that matter.

Thank god there are no hats in the picture. haha

See design #81 for the latest change.

I had a few friends give me feedback that the image kinda resembled Michael Jackson...that's why I was trying to feminize the figure a bit more to distinguish the gender.

Ok...now we are talking...get her slimmed down down at the rib line/waist-line ...and I think it's a wrap.

Done.

I like the right alignment of ESQUIRE. But the neckline scoop looks a bit off...I think it's real close though. I'm thinking the bottom left corner lines shouldn't be so angular...but instead curved out to follow the contour of a more natural curvy chest....so the left bottom left corner would be popping out a nit kinda like the top of her head...so the only straight line in the art would be the right side of the E...the left side would have the head curves and the bottom left side would have the contours of a bit more curvy chest.

Done. See design #79.

It's a move in the right direction...I do like right aligning the esquire...what about on the left alignment...bottom left...is there a way to add curvy depth there? Maybe showing more body? I like the cleavage peekaboo...but perhaps a bit more accent on that left bottom corner. Perhaps it doesn't need to be so angular but instead it could follow more of a artistic curvy bust line?

How is this?

I like the rounded shoulder, hair, and face. I like the "E". I like the red lips and red Esquire band. I also want to incorporate a bit more of a provocative vibe on the blouse...I liked the look when Esquire didn't block the plunging neckline....and is there a way to accent the bossom a bit?

Rounder off the right side and made the left side curl smaller. See designs #75 and #76.

I'm thinking this one is still my favorite...but I feel like it's missing something...perhaps we can work with the left side hair curl or collar curl...and round off the right side shoulder...too pointy?

Keyhole inside the Q.

That was my first idea aswell, tried it and it was a disaster. This looks good because the letters are one under the other. With the Q being the handle, the letter won't be one under the other anymore. It's just a busy something with a lot of stuff going on.

Hmmm...perhaps the "Q" can be the handle of the skeleton key? So the handle doesn't dip too low?

See designs #72 and #73.

Ok. It's growing on me. Can we tuck the letters into the background of her hair like you did with the Big E? That way we get the more hair or headshape...and I'm wondering if there is a creative way to make the red letter shading to tweak that to look more like an old fashioned skeleton key? We do real estate so it would be cool if this inadvertant key could be incorporated?

Way too much.

too much going on.

See designs #70 and #71 for this request and the one on the other version.

Could I see this with a black background as I want to put it on black t shirts.

I agree. This and the one with the block E are the best.

This looks interesting to me.

The "U" looks too big...how about ESQ then Ui with a lower case "i" and then RE on the bottom...all in white with the black 3-d look you had when it was just the big "E" with the all black background.

See #68 and #69. Let me know what you think.

Or perhaps we can go with big block lettering for "ESQ" only...vertically

I love the facial image. But I don't love the lettering. I liked the Big E look. How about getting funky with the lettering...block letters but splitting up the vertical letters...how about ESQ on the top row, then on the second row underneath ESQ a big U then on on the third row a iRE all formatted to look like a block stack?

See designs #65 #66 and #67. Let me know if they're better.

How about something more block-like or 2-D...kinda butting into the silhouette like you had for the Big E?

Done. See design #64.

I think it's getting close. I understand about the eyelashes. I kinda like the big E...but I wonder if we did ESQUIRE vertical instead of the Big E?

perhaps Esquire in the background

I tried eyelashes but can't manage to make it look good. It just ruins the whole thing. How is this?

I kinda like the direction of this one. Can we slap on some eye lashes and give more of a hint of a more voluptuous image? Also, I want to try to brand as just "ESQUIRE" on the T-shirt and drop the property management. If you could get something more tattoo-like on the font of Esquire or somehow put it across the background of the head shot? Trying to make it a more hip urban t-shirt. Trying to use some sexiness to the marketing.

Let me know if you want to see any more changes.