Really like this initially! Can I see it with Partners LLC in the same font as Equine? Not sure I like 3 different fonts. Can you also show me one with maybe a deeper green and a deeper blue? Love the horse! You captured the movement very nicely.
So my only comment on these is the horse. I feel like it looks like a breed of horse that is so different than what we breed. He looks like a Andalusian or Paso Fino and the movement is just not right. Look up a dressage horse like Totilas or Ravel. I will see if I can upload an image. He should be more on his hind in and the legs should move out and not up. Make sense?
Thanks so much for that change! we are almost there. His hind end needs to be more under and not out behind. So far you have done the best job capturing this. Thanks!
Thank you!!!! can you just do me 2 favors. will you add the shoulder definition to 61 and 62 like you have on 47? Also can you make Partners, LLC black as well? Thank you thank you=)
This is my partners favorite as well, she just feels the horse needs a bit more refinement. If you can or feel like it, please show some changes to the refinement of the horse. Shorten the back up a tiny bit, clean the lines of the tail, no whispy look to it. Tuck the hind end of the horse under a bit. I know its difficult to understand. We Dressage riders are very particular. Thanks for sticking with it!
One more thing. Can you do one where you take 84 and move the horse down a bit closer to the wording. If that might work. It is our favorite so far!!! Great work on these and thanks for sticking with me!
your still our favorite. I am copying an email from my partner below to help on the horse a bit more. This is in reference to design 86. I like it the way it is but she has some further comments. Please save it the way it is just in case =) Thanks again!
the legs on a good horse are supposed to be essentially parallel. If that was the case the left hind leg needs more lift and angle, the right front needs more bend in the knee, the right front needs less bend in the fetlock(ankle) and the right hind needs to be just slightly more under the rump to carry the horse's weight. The rump could be a little fuller to match the fullness of the shoulder and the back should not be too long and the neck should not be too crusty.
I put someone else first to allow her to make some changes. notify me when you are ready and I will put you back in first. Thanks. Its down to you and one other.