Epic Getaways and Retreats, LLCLogo Design Contest

It is too hard to read the writing in the ring. My eyes just get lost in the words. Showed to several folks and they all had same impression. Not sure what to tell you. Same on all your designs. Not sure if there is a way to maybe break up with different font or lower caps.......

Hi,
Thanks for feedback. Please see revised entries and let me know if you want any changes.

Regards,
digiartz

Can't read with ease the getaways and retreats. Get rid of the llc. Need some lake and mountain type features