thank you for providing feedback, but is there a chance to upload the file due to the position of ranking 3rd at this time, I can't do it. Have you chosen the winning logo?
thank you for providing feedback, but is there a chance to upload the file due to the position of ranking 3rd at this time, I can't do it. Have you chosen the winning logo?
I'd like to see this one with the blue yen yang in the new style. Please make it so that the rays do not touch the yen yang. Notice the lines to show where I want space.
There is too much white space in the center. I’m really wanting the two pieces to turn in towards one another like they are going to collide/crash head on.
I drew this in hopes of showing you what I really want going on in the middle. It's more like two separate entities coming together where the light bursts from as they collide. This is the best I can do drawing but it still needs the beams coming from the contact point of the two entities. https://www.canva.com/design/DAE5BU9u3Ys/00vcMGijqjX3qxYFaXOfLQ/view
I like this blue a lot. Please enlarge the center like the red-orange version. I think with those options I will be able to start finalizing between yours and another designer. These are very strong. Thank you!
The center is still not evenly distributed. I still love the deep curvature but want it to be more centered. Does that make sense? Sorry this is so confusing without being able to chat.
I know this is off balance but for an example, the curvature of this is preferred if possible BUT balanced. The last two don't have the same dynamic movement.
This design with a larger and balanced center is still a solid option.
1. Can you make the purple more electric and vibrant?
2. Fewer bursts/rays but still similar style
3. Larger and balanced center (not off center)
4. One version that maintains this color
5. One version with the red-orange "yen yang"
Making huge progress here. I still want to see that "yen yang" like center more balanced. It looks like it's off to one side. The yen yang is all about that balance and harmony.
Can your play with some color variations
1. more in the colors of the sun
2. Electric purple
3. Fewer line’s and dots representing the explosion but even a bit thicker, heavier.
Ok, this is the one and #431 are the two I’d like to work on.
1. Make the center yen yang area bigger
2. Make the outer explosive area bolder and heavier.
It’s still looking to flowerlike. And they are just a little too soft or feminine. This should be explosive. Think huge energy! It also may be that it needs to be simplified to gain a big more boldness.
These are not intended to be suggestions for new designs.
This is good stuff. The input I’m getting from others is it’s beautiful but it is looking more like a flower. Any ideas on how to break it out of that look?
I like the one where there is light coming from the center of that fusion space in the middle. Similar to #402. I also think I'd prefer the center to be bit more balanced. Like the yen yang is balanced. I want it to still have this same look and not be a true yen yang just balanced like it.
I'd like to see more from you. This one is not really in the running but it would be nice to see how else you can communicate story + fusion with your talent.
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https://www.dreamstime.com/stock-images-planet-earth-rising-sun-image29298534
https://www.dreamstime.com/stock-illustration-realistic-sun-rays-light-effect-transparent-background-image92289863
Same color but with a bit more drama.
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1. Can you make the purple more electric and vibrant?
2. Fewer bursts/rays but still similar style
3. Larger and balanced center (not off center)
4. One version that maintains this color
5. One version with the red-orange "yen yang"
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1. more in the colors of the sun
2. Electric purple
3. Fewer line’s and dots representing the explosion but even a bit thicker, heavier.
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1. Make the center yen yang area bigger
2. Make the outer explosive area bolder and heavier.
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Make the outer edge (anything that is not the center, thicker, bolder.
The key is to make the explosion of fusion look like it's coming at us. The key to that is a stronger center.
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These are not intended to be suggestions for new designs.
https://www.brandbucket.com/search?q=Fusion
Look at them as a reference of how simple they are. I’m concerned about the screen printing these.
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https://thehabitat.com/life/what-color-is-the-sun/
And the in this photo as well
https://www.thoughtco.com/definition-of-fusion-604474
Thanks
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