Alright tonight is the last night I’ll redesign thing. We will pick by the end of tomorrow. This design get rid of the moon. Make the mountains the lighter grey and the board of the state darker grey.
This one give it the head of 398. shift the mountains to the right a bit and spread the peak out a little. Also I would like to see it in the color scheme of 391 and 390. Also can you add a little detail in the moon. Thank you
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I change the top of the mountain with the reference photo that you upload, and crescent moon variation.
more feedback are welcome.
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#55 my first concept :)
"b" to the "e", hexagon to Arizona, mountain to mountain with cactus.
still on the original concept, we just developing the concept :)
you not losing me as a designer.
my apologies to you because you have trouble describing your vision to me.
sometimes the client download the my and draw the change on my design.
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your last uploaded image are image of coyote, do you want me to change the coyote?
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no worries. So honestly what do you think of these designs. I feel that we have gotten so far from your original concept are we losing you as a designer. I also feel that I am having a hard time describing my vision to you. Hopefully we can correct this. Thanks for all your hard work.
Instead of have all of the embers at the top of the E go up could you pretend as though there is a tube around half of the E top and the embers have to go out that tube. (Does that make sense)
Thank you for everything. Out of all the designs you have done this one and the moon one have been my favorite. I’m almost done I swear I just had a lot of people ask to see changes. On this one can you you
1) stretch out the lettering as in the 3rd place and frame it at the ends
2) use this E but do the disinterestinh effect
3) do the border between the lettering and mountains like that of the 3rd place
4) do another version with the traditional capital E
I think what I like about the earlier versions of the embers you did is that you had few embers in them but they were bigger. The resent ones there are a lot and they are smaller. Now I'm not say you need to do one over the other but maybe find a happy medium
Can you change the colors on this one. Go with a red or maroon for lettering,embers, and coyote. Make the mountains the color of the moon and the moon and border white.
If you need to shorten the mountain to how you had it in 339 to make it work I'm fine with that. I think my biggest issues with the mountain was the cutout around the lettering and that looks much better now.
So you don't have to take that drawing I did to literal. I like the way you have done the embers so far. you make them seem natural and free flowing, this one doesn't. I think there may be to many embers and or to many bunched together.
Yes! That looks great. One more thing I want to try is switch the coyote head the other direction. keep embers as they are but make it look as though the coyote is bursting out of the embers. Thanks
Is it possible to shift the mountain to the right so the embers aren’t on the mountain? Also could you thin the border between the letters and mountain especially with the b. Thank you
Yes, thank you.
1) can you stretch the lettering now so it make sense we stopped the border where we did.
2) is it possible to make the cutout in the mountain by the lettering smaller?
3) can you make that mountain bigger still? Stretch it up and left and leave the cacti where they are?
A few things 1) could you center the lettering more like you have in 235 2)could you try a thinner outline around the lettering and mountain 3) can you bring back the 3rd cactus 4) can you widen the distance between the 2 peaks on the mountain. Thank you very much.
Make the Mountain taller still and shift it more to the right. Also what would it look like if the lettering didn't have a boarder by the mountain and it was just laid on top of the mountain. Finally try bottle necking the embers at the beginning. Thank you
No worries, I'm sure you are busy. You can call me Daniel by the way. So I'm really liking this E. Can you make the mountain taller still also shift the 2 peaks to the right a bit
Thank you for these. I like the way the e looks but can you disintegrate it more, to the point that the top tip of the e is gone and slightly continue you the disintegration down the vertical line of the E. Also I think I prefer this design with the mountains on top. Could you add more embers to this as they are in design 290. Could you also make the mountain a little taller. Thank you.
So the 2 design submissions we like are 290 and 285. The first thing we want to try is a normal capital E that disintigrates into embers I uploaded 2 images to show you what I mean.
I am so sorry, I can not add logs under the E it is to similar to 2nd ranked designer now.
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I really like these. Can you change the mountain color so the embers stand out more. Also just to see how it look could you add logs under the E so it looks like a campfire
I really love these 2 especially the moon one. A few things to note 1) I don’t like how the cacti come down through the lettering 2) make the mountain a little larger and wider. 3) I love these colors but I would like to see one with the embers and coyote. Orange/red. If we can do that I think this might be the one.
I like the E and how the embers have a wind swept look. But the empty space looks weird. Could you combine how you did the mountains in 199 and even try it with the moon but cut the moon in half as though it’s behind the mountains. Thank you
Don’t take it to literal I like how you have done things. Just thought it might be a good way to get more embers and for the coyote to look more natural
I can’t thank you enough for all you have done. I really love the boldness of the full headed coyote. We will stick with this design. Last thing I swear...what if we switch the flame in the b to the e. I’m only ask this because if we simplied the design down the road it would be the letter the coyote is attached to.
I’m liking this version but try having the embers split in the middle to form the chin and ear. I also like how the embers are burning off the mouth and nose
yes, that looks like an Arizona coyote hockey team.
honestly I don't mean to copy the hockey team logo.
I will change the look of the coyote :)
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Thank you for the color variations. I think we need to change the coyote head some how. When I show this logo to people they say it reminds them of the Arizona coyote hockey team. I’m open to suggestions on this but I also thought if you make it look more like a flame that might work. Look up the hockey team and let me know what you think.
can you try getting rid of the embers on the right side. Extending the tail of the b just a bit and angle the coyote head and embers a bit to the left. thank you so much.
Not digging the coyote. I still really love the design. Go back to design 141 change the B to this be but extent tall tale on the b a bit. I Also really like 140 if you want to do anything with that. How do you feel about the designs?
Thanks for trying this doesn't have the feel that I wanted, but the B looks much better. I still think it has some improvement to go to make it a little more natural. Could you add this B to the look of 134
Yeah but I’m not like this. Maybe the coyote doesn’t feel like natural smoke. We will be pulling you in the finals so maybe think on this. I’ll be away tomorrow most of the day. Thanks for all the work you have done.
I'm liking the new look of this coyote. Two thoughts with this 1) what if you changed the coyote to smoke instead of flames and add embers floating around the smoke. 2) Change the B to a charred ember look.
I like these color variants. A few things I would like to try is have more negative space in the coyote head. also what if you tried having embers coming off the B to form the coyote. As much as I think this logo is bad ass our name is ember brewing and there are few embers.
The coyote head doesn't lend itself well here. I still like the full body coyote. ill try and find a picture to give you more of and idea. One thing that I would like to try with this logo is combining it with the Arizona one. The moon would go on top.
This one is really cool. Could you stretch the mountain the length of the moon? Also that pointy flame on the left this bothers me. Could you try and removing it?
I like the added mountains. could you center the mountain more and try bring the cacti in the foreground and contrast them more from the mountain. Also can you minimize the shadowing on the mountain. Thank you very much.
I love the moon and the added cacti. The coyote still doesn’t look right. Maybe it’s the hook flame on the left. I also added a file of a coyote and moon that I would like you to try if you have the time. Thank you.
yeah that b looks so much better. Would you be willing to submit any other logo variants using that coyote. maybe a full body flamed coyote in front of a moon. I'm open. But i'm really loving these new ones
I'm really liking this change. one thing that is still bothering me is the b. It looks like the b was scribbled in. could you try and just leaving it the background color and/or making it a flame that leads to the coyote. Also could you play around with fonts and colors. Last request is try changing the hexagon shape to the state of Arizona. Thank you so much.
I like where you are going with this. I like the coyote head coming from the flames but I feel as though it needs to be reworked some how. It took me a few moments to see it.
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shift to the left or right?
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Tilt the head to the left, edit the embers to the mountain.
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"b" to the "e", hexagon to Arizona, mountain to mountain with cactus.
still on the original concept, we just developing the concept :)
you not losing me as a designer.
my apologies to you because you have trouble describing your vision to me.
sometimes the client download the my and draw the change on my design.
I hope that's help.
your last uploaded image are image of coyote, do you want me to change the coyote?
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can you give me drawing of the E.
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1) stretch out the lettering as in the 3rd place and frame it at the ends
2) use this E but do the disinterestinh effect
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I am a little hard to draw what you are referring to, but I will continue to try it :)
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1) can you stretch the lettering now so it make sense we stopped the border where we did.
2) is it possible to make the cutout in the mountain by the lettering smaller?
3) can you make that mountain bigger still? Stretch it up and left and leave the cacti where they are?
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is it like this?
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rotate the "e" so I can make it like a flame :)
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the "e" not smooth on the ember start like the previous "b" #279
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honestly I don't mean to copy the hockey team logo.
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I think the designs much better from my early designs.
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I think it is because the color, but I match the color of your picture. I will fix it
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I think you can share it on the attachment on logotournament :)
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I try simple coyote
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I try to add the coyote foots, but it did not work well:)
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