This has potential, IF the illustration (hair and glasses) could look more refined, heroic and prestigious, and less cartoonish / comical. Make it look cool, not comedic. Also, Hall of Fame is upside down and backward. Could/should read "Elvis Tribute Artist" across the top, and "Hall of Fame" across the bottom -- with a star on each side to separate the top and bottom phrases. Make sense?
Peg, I tried to give you a bit of art direction, but feel like its been ignored. Can you confirm you got this feedback? I really like your design EXCEPT for the illustration (hair and glasses) which looks too cartoonish / comical and needs to look prestigious. Your new, most recent entries do not resolve this. Let me know if you have any questions. Thanks!
Peg, your entry #16 is even more cartoonish looking. The illustration needs to be more respectful and reverent. NOT like a funny caricature. This is a hall of fame to honor Elvis Tribute Artists, so the logo should NOT appear to be poking fun. I feel like your illustration here is just not prestigious looking enough. Thanks! I hope you can try to rework the drawing - I feel like this design has potential except for that issue.
Peg, I really do like these - but again, the illustration of the Elvis figure is a bit too cartoony still. The hair is really the problem - too clumpy and globby. Wish you could give it a more wavy, more elegant look. Good work - hope you can improve it a bit.