Elim A DentLogo Design Contest

can you make the lettering look more 3d and the hail stone sinking into the top of the A and pieces of the A falling out from the hail stone impact.

Hi,
Thank you for the feedback :)
these the udapte #15 #16 #17

let me know if you need any adjustment would like to see, i really love to do :)

Best,
Nur

getting better doesn't need slogan and the particles flying off the A doesn't match physics. They should be flying off from the impact vs just falling down.

maybe bringing the impacting hail stone into the top of A and then particles flying off of it outward.

Can you add the glowing effect around the A like original

Hi, These my update #18 #19 #20
Please let me know if you would like to see any further revisions..

little too much particles now they should fly off similar to my original logo where the hail stone is impacting the A and breaking the top corner off of it along with breaking the hail stone. Debris is falling out from the A and the Hail stone. I would add trails behind the debris just like the stones and the trails coming behind the hail stones should end in a point like original logo.

can you remove the grey impact star looking thing where the main hail stone hits the A and make individual tracers behind the particles like you have on the hail stones. Can you also make the hail stones come to more of a point at the back end of the tracer trail. Can you add some shadows on the lettering like original logo and a gradient background.

Maybe show some cracking and or pieces missing from the hail stone due to impact.

Hey, Here's the revision #26 #27 #28 #29 :)

1.)Looking good. The logo i have now comes in all different sizes so i can use them for small website icons all the way up to full web banners the only one im missing is transparent background. If i approve yours will i get them in a few variants like this?
2.)Also can you try adding the slogan somewhere maybe just a banner around the bottom. If you can do it inside of like a scroll that would look nice.
3.) Is there any other touches you can think of doing to this to make it pop just that little more or give it some type of edge modern look?

Maybe needs some lighting effects i think i can see light highlights on current logo.

Im curious to see what it would look like if you made it look like we were shooting the hail stones with a gun?

There is firearm scope reticle that look like the A you could make the A look like that reticle and then show a hail stone being shot.

http://pro-patria.us/yahoo_site_admin/assets/images/ACOGReticle.243183548_large.jpg

Look at this image for idea

Hi,

Thank you for the feedback :)
Sure, if you approve me i will send all variations you need size, transparent bg,various format files .etc

Best,
Nur :)

I would get rid of the red circle just use the triange have it run down to edge or silver crosshair.

update #49 :)

now it needs the line coming up from middle cross hair spike with horizontal lines

the lettering needs more of a pop maybe put a boarder around it same color as silver crosshair.

Here's the update #51 #52 #53

can you make 51 with horizontal spiked lines going big at bottom to small at top.

update #57

I would make the A glow but put that silver boarder around Elim and Dent

Here's the update #68 :)