Just took a look, and I like that direction. What I am trying to do is get a solid 6-8 comps that I can present to everyone (engineer, producer, team of like 4 people).
The only thing on this one is I would try a font that less whim-sickle and italic like and more of just a clean looking Sanserif font - like Helvetica or something... Also, I am not sure what the tagline would be, but I do like this direction, and I'm sure we'll consider it.
I like this direction! Could you work on the way the text sits a little more... I'm afraid the way Only comes up that it covers the "L" and makes Eldest somewhat hard to read/make out. Overall, i like.
And to be honest, I'd love for you to submit your first idea again as well with just a different font, and perhaps the mark as a standalone with the text to the right or underneath... I'd like to present both options when it comes to that!
I like these new ones even better - just a couple of things. Can we try it without the EOP initials in the middle of the record. Also, maybe lose the little record player arm and just have the record. And maybe try it with some different fonts.
I would love to get a couple of versions of #21 and #22 with more of a clean font like #10 but even a little lighter - less bold. Just a simple clean font with the clean record. Thanks!
We presented many of the various options that everyone has done to the group, and the one with the record was actually one of the favorites... So, just wondering if we could take numbers 42 and 43 and just do a couple of different options with fonts (including what you have) and colors...
Hi nathancurrin, you don't want to see anymore ideas from me? i like to offer more options, especially when i do not have clear guidance to rely on. When a design idea pops in my head..i go ahead and express it...this is just the process my art goes through...i hope you are not against more ideas from me...but i'm looking forward to your detailed feedback of course.
Oh, no problem! I like to see more stuff, however I've presented the group with only a few of the options from this tournament including some from you, And I am waiting on their feedback on Monday...