Hi, during our meeting late yesterday, we decided we are going with this one, however, we noticed that the dots are a little bit too close to the circle and that could cause a problem with the branding iron, apparently on #575 there is a little bit more distance, could you please review this?
We just had discussion here and we still like better this one (#575), can we try this exact same one, but just opening a little bit the circles (more space between them) without getting too close to the ear?
I like the fact that the six dots are centered now, however, #575 looks more balanced, this dots seem to be twisted to the right (I know they aren't) is there something we can do to fix this?
actually it was on my proposal #419, when you said "
The circles look as if they are aligned as two pairs of three each, not as 6 individual circles orbiting around a large circle."
that's why i was changed it to spread a little to the left.
It looks very good, I want to see if it's possible to rotate the six dots altogether clockwise to see if we can have the space between dot 3 and 4 centered (instead of dot 4)?... we just need to make sure we keep a safe distance from dot 6 to the ear (probably we could also rotate the ear if we need to).
Using this as a reference, could you please upload a new version considering the following:
- Make the head slightly larger, not as large as #561.
- Make the head more vertical, as #561.
- Make the dots slightly larger, not as large as #561.
- Keep this "C", NOT #561.
- Make only two versions, one with shield, the other one without it.
Great, it's good to know your splitting the prize, both of you have done a great job. I'm having a meeting to discuss the logo and will come back to you with the changes. Thank you.
please feel free to ask if you need to see any change / option.
,meanwhile Designer Tere already sent me message about combining both of our idea and i don't have problem with that.
Since we need to keep the dots this size, you can tilt the head a little bit down (so the forehead looks more vertical), or even tilt the ear a little if needed.
Could you make the following changes to this one:
- Change the head for our original head (#328).
- Use the tail (#328).
- Make another version (just one) exactly the same but without the shield.
here's a revised version, i made this by considering the logo to be used as stamp so i made it in simpler and bolder line. it is also geometrically aligned as you can see in entry #557, the dot lines, lines weight, and the shield bottom all has already redesigned to meet the purpose of this logo.
please feel free to ask if you need any change / option
- We need to keep the distance between the circles, this are too close to each other.
- The circles look as if they are aligned as two pairs of three each, not as 6 individual circles orbiting around a large circle.
- When making the head larger:
+We need to keep everything centered (same distance to the walls of the shield).
+We need to keep proportion, that's why I mentioned you can change the shape. In #420 the logo lost proportion when growing the head.
This one is looking very promising, can you make a version with the following?:
- 6 dots slightly larger.
- Fix the distance between the dots, it needs to be the same (and keep them centered).
- Head slightly larger (you can play with different shapes).
Thank you, I think I didn't explain myself clearly, I wanted the dots (altogether) a little more separated from the circle (horse), not necessarily more separated among them.
I'm not sure if I want to have the eye, also, when I mentioned the head problem, it's actually not the head, but the position of the head, it's a little crouched down if you compare it to the original.
I like very much the fact that is symmetrical, and that the 6 dots are perfectly centered, however, I like a lot better the way the other head looked, can we do something about it?
Also we need to use this color: Pantone RGB 4975 C
Looks good, it should be six dots though.
I like the fact that it is symmetrical, however, if you look at it from some distance, it looks like everything inside the shield is more to the left, how can we fix this?
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please check entries #580 #581 and #582
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actually it was on my proposal #419, when you said "
The circles look as if they are aligned as two pairs of three each, not as 6 individual circles orbiting around a large circle."
that's why i was changed it to spread a little to the left.
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- Make the head slightly larger, not as large as #561.
- Make the head more vertical, as #561.
- Make the dots slightly larger, not as large as #561.
- Keep this "C", NOT #561.
- Make only two versions, one with shield, the other one without it.
Thank you.
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do you need the circle to be aligned as two pairs of three ?
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,meanwhile Designer Tere already sent me message about combining both of our idea and i don't have problem with that.
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#560 #561 #562 #563 #564 #565 #566 and #567
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- Change the head for our original head (#328).
- Use the tail (#328).
- Make another version (just one) exactly the same but without the shield.
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please feel free to ask if you need any change / option
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- The circles look as if they are aligned as two pairs of three each, not as 6 individual circles orbiting around a large circle.
- When making the head larger:
+We need to keep everything centered (same distance to the walls of the shield).
+We need to keep proportion, that's why I mentioned you can change the shape. In #420 the logo lost proportion when growing the head.
Thanks.
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- 6 dots slightly larger.
- Fix the distance between the dots, it needs to be the same (and keep them centered).
- Head slightly larger (you can play with different shapes).
Thank you.
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meanwhile please feel free to ask if you need to see any change / option :)
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my proposes symetrical concept is based on circle shape, your current logo is more like oval
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Also we need to use this color: Pantone RGB 4975 C
Thank you.
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I like the fact that it is symmetrical, however, if you look at it from some distance, it looks like everything inside the shield is more to the left, how can we fix this?
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