El Reno ServicesLogo Design Contest

thank you : )
please check #35, #36 for embroidery

When you send us the proofs. Can you send a monotone in black and a monotone in white as well? Gives us more options for embroidery

Thank you for all your work. We’ll stick with this one. Excellent work

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just upoloaded... take out the notches on the top line.. and we're done.

wow, that's good news, please check #31, #32 (more complete icon) and I'm waiting for the next good news
Thanks again : )

updated

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See what I just uploaded. Make those line bolder. Its almost perfect.
I’ll end the contest early for you

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Can you make the Texas as big as you can within that circle. And make that circle and outline around the “services” tab bolder

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Try taking the shadow out of the icon

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Try a white background. And the little cut outs on top..make them a little shallower

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Take the silver background out from behind “El Reno” and the “Texas”. Fill colors like that make it harder for embroidery . “Services” doesn’t look vertically centered.

Thanks for your feedback,
please check-update #25, #26 and let me know if you need a changes
Thanks again : )

id like to see this with the yellow sunburst background. Also the little "dips" in the top on either side need to be widened a little.