Thanks so much for this entry! There are some things here that I really like. I do have some thoughts though, that maybe we can develop a little more.
You are the only one to have come up with the idea of the brain, which is a good one. But I think it needs to look a little more like a brain; I think it needs a little more definition. Also, is there any way you can include the concept of learning around the brain? I'm not sure what that might look like.