eGirlLogo Design Contest

Feedback please.

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Feedback Please

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eGirl is and "Electronic Girl" she has gadgets, she is made from technology, born from the internet, she is not a Southern Californian surfer girl, she has gadgets all over her superhero persona, think digital!

I like the character - not the logo - the whole image needs to clean up and get some very clear thick robust lines - shiny bubblegum star superhero are words that come to mind - definitive black line - love the glove with the gadgets - like the character - look at the logos in first and second place - they are clean

Let me know what changes you would like to see.
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Please let us know what you like and don't like regarding our logo, so we can better forfill your needs.
Thanks.

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i do like the girl - she is very close to where we want to go - the typography is not there at all - please clean it up a lot - emphasise it - black line - drop shadow - clean up the style - please only include the girl and the logo - no extra characters - thanks

Am I getting closer? I do appreciate the guidance.

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Am I getting closer? I do appreciate the guidance.

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i am gravitating towards the character but your typeface treatment is not there yet - it needs to be cleaner and more thought out - your drop shadows just blur - the type is coming together but you need to get it to a clean possibly shiney crisp line feel - maybe an outline - i quite like the bubblegum style of the dot on the i - what software are you using? you need some alienskin maybe - she could stand next to the e - dont shade black into a color

We use Corel 13. The letters/edges on our end are crisp. Possibly when we convert to the requirments of this site, there is some fuzziness?

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Your input is all I need. Keep it coming.

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It's really late here !

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thanks so much for all the entries - your original girl has the character i was after - your knowledge of balance and typography needs to be your focus, KISS Keep it Simple Stupid - is the moto of Madison Ave - clean and balanced and simple

Saludos

eArtist