This looks great - if we can try the GANGSTER word wrap under on this one to, let’s - outside the circle in black , with thin black line wrapping around rest of it. Please do the dots in GANGSTER. You may need to shift eat down so it’s centered in the black part
Hopefully u r asleep! Let’s definitely see this one above with GANGSTER at bottom. Dots please between the letters. We r hoping to have a decision by end of day today!
My partner likes the thin line with GANGSTER - so let’s keep above option and just add the dots between the letters, using the font for gangster from 166!
We can do one like this, but the GANGSTER needs to be along bottom, so it reads EAT GANGSTER. My partner was wanting to see the GANGSTER along the bottom but inside on the black part of the logo. Again, text space it so GANGSTER takes up a bit more room. Thanks Mashel!
Is it the same as Zums did? if true then that is the concept of "zums" and I will have many problems imitating it. I hope you understand my position here.
Your last design is a good option to show - but we are looking for GANGSTER to curve around the bottom - AND BE TEXT SPACED and slightly larger font than it is
We just have two of you designers contending at this point...and one thing we’d like to explore with this logo is wrapping the GANGSTER on the bottom of this logo instead of having it straight across. You can space it out a bit - some of the feedback is that GANGSTER in this logo may not be prevalent enough. So perhaps w wrapping it, spreading the letters a bit and making the text just slightly larger might work!
can we give a little more space between eat and gangster. also very slightly shrink eat a bit. this is black and white and vice versa looks truly great!
THE EAT GANGSTER IS GREAT - PERFECT. WE NEED A DIFFERENT G FROM THE FISH HOOK. I SEE WHERE THE CONFUSION IS - THERE ARE TWO TYPES OF LOWERCASE G'S IN ENGLISH: 1) A FISH HOOK AND 2) A LOOP. IF YOU GOOGLE EACH YOU'LL SEE THE DIFFERENCE! WE DONT ACTUALLY WANT A FISHHOOK :) BUT THE SLASH IS RIGHT WHERE WE WANT IT (JUST NO NEED TO SEPARATE IT FROM THE G, IT CAN JUST BE A PART OF IT!
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COUPLE THINGS:
_ IT SHOULD BE EAT GANGSTER AROUND THE CIRCLE _ BUT OTHERWISE GOOD THERE
_ FOR THE LOWERCASE G< SEE IF YOU CAN FIND A SUPER SIMPLE G (I SEE YOU DID FIND ONE WITH A PERFECT CIRCLE _ SO THAT IS GOOD _ BUT JUST DONT LIKE THAT LITTLE CIRCLE AND THE SPIKEY THING>
_ THEN THE SLASH SHOULD JUST BE INSIDE THE CIRCLE OF THE G> SO NOT THE BIG CIRCLE OF THE LOGO< BUT THE CIRCLE OF THE G ITSELF>
Yes that looks great - u do great stuff! We will have you as a top designer for finalist stage - and are loving a couple you’ve created! One other thing we are exploring is to create a super symbol in the logo that could eventually stand alone as we grow. Can you try to make the below:
- same BLACK circle background
- place a lowercase g in WHITE in the circle (it can be pretty large in the circle as it will be the only thing in there!)
- find a clean modern font where the g has a perfect circle for the top round part of the letter
- and place a slash through the round part of the g (so that it is like a play off a No Smoking sign that has a red circle and slash over a cigarette). But the slash and the letter should all just be white. The inside of the logo is done.
- then, have that thin black line around the outside of the big black circle and put EAT G.A.N.G.S.T.E.R. (With dots not periods!) on that thin line going around the circle on the outside. Should be a thin solid line going around the circle —————-EAT GANGSTER—————
Yes! :) you got it - I do think the band can be a little wider so the GANGSTER has a little more room and is floating on the band...looks a little crowded height-wise
Try this....Make a thick white line side to side on the circle where GANGSTER is. Just run the line all the way from one side alll the way to the other. Make it thick enough so that the word GANGSTER can fit on it. So now it’s not so much a line, but a BAND or RIBBON that GANGSTER can sit on top of. Make GANGSTER text BLACK (because the thick line is white).
Sorry I must not be communicating clearly. Keep Eat the way it was...no need to adjust anything with it for now. I just don’t want a BOX around GANGSTER. We want to see a BAND. A white band. A band goes alllllll the way from one side of logo to the other (it’s not truncated like a box). So make it like a continuous band, just like how the Eat script is continuous off the logo. Make sense? Im trying to figure out how to say this better....once you get it, you’ll be like oh right! :)
Ok but can we add the white bar - so that it’s a band across the logo and then GANGSTER fits into it. A straight white band or ribbon across where GANGSTER is - and then put GANGSTER in black text
Band all the way across the logo - sorry to be annoying! And then may need to play w spacing slightly - shrink eat maybe? And move up slightly? Shift GANGSTER down a it?
Could u do a simple white bar across where GANGSTER is and place GANGSTER in black text in the bar...may need to adjust slightly where eat and gangster are (maybe slide eat up just slightly for balance)
dots instead of periods if possible....and i think there is a font I've seen where the G doesn't have that last horizontal lip on it...it looks super modern...can you use a font like that? i really like the eat on this one - and it allows GANGSTER to be bigger. you could maybe text space GANGSTER out a little more too...
Can we slide the eat Up and make ganster bigger? Maybe eat can be a little thinner! This is looking good...maybe explore one other scripted font - thin, modern, fresh
We are trying a scripted out “eat” with light modern, cursive...tail of the e and tail of the t going off the circle logo, and then gangster underneath (modern, all caps, dots separating the letters). If u want to try that direction...
likely easiest if you do black background white text for eat - then instead of the hole for the e, put 2 white dots in there for eyes. then the tail of the e could have a smily cheek symbol on it to...
try no outline, so just use negative space for smiley. take out fork for this one. slide eat up and put GANGSTER under with dots between each letter. we are trying to get the word GANGSTER a little closer in size to the word eat. maybe try just black and white!
thanks!i think we are liking a bit simpler. Another direction to explore is making the e into a smiley face where you simply put 2 eyes where the hole of the e is - in the negative space...there might be something to this...
Hi :) right now, in the above artwork, we’ve been doing periods in between G.A.N.G.S.T.E.R..... wondering if we can do a dot instead, like midway up the letters...so like this w the dashes, but do dots instead of dashes: G-A-N....etc
can you tell me the orange hex code you mean? and also I'm a little confused with your feedback "Also can we try dots between each letter instead of periods"? can you explain to me?
Loving this! The orange is looking faded tho....instead of that can we just find an orange that is still vivid, just more in warmer yellow time of orange than red tone. This is one of our very faves!
This is looking great...can we use an even lighter grey and a warmer lighter orange. Also can we try a softer font for GANSTER...super modern, fresh, light, maybe a little more feminine
I like the look of it stacked, the way you have in the previous version. this said, I'd like the GANG STER in a lighter grey. Also, I'd like to explore EAT on a light orange background square block (no rounded edges on the orange background). Right now its looking like a caution sign but I think w a lighter orange background with white text, it could work...
i think we need a softer orange color (this feels very red - which make it look like a caution sign :)). what if you did an orange bar and the put "eat" in white and the fork would be orange, spilling in from background. And then spread the text in the word "eat" so it reaches the same width as GANGSTER. the GANGSTER is cool stacked like this but not sure we are nailing the font for that yet. I'm open to you using dots instead of periods to separate the letters in GANGSTER....
Can we do this softer (grey instead of black, maybe a softer warmer orange)...also perhaps eat is on its side in lowercase? just to mix up the fonts a bit. probably still need the dots between the gangster letters...but maybe just in between G.A.N.G and then S.T.E.R (don't need on the end ones). I like idea of eat being in this box...maybe no rounded edges and eat is white in the negative space?
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COUPLE THINGS:
_ IT SHOULD BE EAT GANGSTER AROUND THE CIRCLE _ BUT OTHERWISE GOOD THERE
_ FOR THE LOWERCASE G< SEE IF YOU CAN FIND A SUPER SIMPLE G (I SEE YOU DID FIND ONE WITH A PERFECT CIRCLE _ SO THAT IS GOOD _ BUT JUST DONT LIKE THAT LITTLE CIRCLE AND THE SPIKEY THING>
_ THEN THE SLASH SHOULD JUST BE INSIDE THE CIRCLE OF THE G> SO NOT THE BIG CIRCLE OF THE LOGO< BUT THE CIRCLE OF THE G ITSELF>
ITS GETTING THERE>>>
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- same BLACK circle background
- place a lowercase g in WHITE in the circle (it can be pretty large in the circle as it will be the only thing in there!)
- find a clean modern font where the g has a perfect circle for the top round part of the letter
- and place a slash through the round part of the g (so that it is like a play off a No Smoking sign that has a red circle and slash over a cigarette). But the slash and the letter should all just be white. The inside of the logo is done.
- then, have that thin black line around the outside of the big black circle and put EAT G.A.N.G.S.T.E.R. (With dots not periods!) on that thin line going around the circle on the outside. Should be a thin solid line going around the circle —————-EAT GANGSTER—————
Make sense? Sorta? :)
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Don't hesitate to let me know if you need a change.
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sorry if this is confusing!
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