Hey Edwin! Good to see you submitting work on this. We thought about going straight through you, but wanted to see other ideas too. We love what you've done here though.
We like that VIP figure stands out from the others in line, but are afraid he blends into the carpet. Any thoughts on addressing that issue?
Also, maybe some color combos that only use the navy and red.
Hey Edwin- After you give us a look at what I posted above, could you try something new for us?
Look at entry #32. We like that its a long line that fades into the logo. If we could have a strong prominent figure in the front just in front of a turnstile. We think that concept with your style would be a good look.
As one final idea for us to consider, we would like to see the line, turnstile, and VIP red figure closer to an iconic monument. Our biggest Easy Pass Tours logo is for the Eiffel Tower. So if we could take what we've done so far but make it obvious that they are waiting in line to get into the Eiffel Tower that would be great.
Another idea would be for them to be in line not for the Eiffel Tower but for a museum. This would allow us to use the logo for Easy Pass Tours in several different cities (whereas the Eiffel Tower would restrict us just to Paris).