I think you are on the right track. We like that it's something skipping a line, but we are not sure if we love the pawn (chess board) type figures. Can you play with that a little? I think people may confuse them for keyholes.
Thank you for your feedback, I'll submit a new version within the next hours. If you think of any other changes you would like to see, just let me know.
I like the turnstile, but is there a line? It seems like there is just a mob around the turnstile, and you can't tell that the red figure has an advantage really.
It's better. We are having problems easily identifying the turnstile as a turnstile. We are afraid first time customers won't recognize that. I think the #1 ranking has a more clear turnstile.
Look at entry #32. We like that its a long line that fades into the logo. If we could have a strong prominent figure in the front just in front of a turnstile. We think that concept with your style would be a good look.
Here is #52 with a more recognizable turnstile: #62.
Unfortunately I can't go too close to entry #32 as it would against the rules. In #63, I've turned the line a bit so the figure skipping the line is more prominent, but I don't think I can go any closer to #32, I'm sorry.
I like the two most recent ones you've submitted. Can we see them in a variety of different color combinations, and w/o the E ticket in the figure's hand?
As one final idea for us to consider, we would like to see the line, turnstile, and VIP red figure closer to an iconic monument. Our biggest Easy Pass Tours logo is for the Eiffel Tower. So if we could take what we've done so far but make it obvious that they are waiting in line to get into the Eiffel Tower that would be great.
Another idea would be for them to be in line not for the Eiffel Tower but for a museum. This would allow us to use the logo for Easy Pass Tours in several different cities (whereas the Eiffel Tower would restrict us just to Paris).
Orange in place of red: #76, #77 Green in place of red: #78, #79
Black in place of dark blue (with red): #80, #81, #82 Black in place of dark blue (with orange): #83, #84, #85 Black in place of dark blue (with green): #86, #87, #88
Company name all one color: #89, #90 All text one color: #91, #92
No background colors: #93, #94, #95
All one color: #96, #97
Night sky: #98, #99
If you would like to see any others, just let me know. I will submit the Eiffel Tower and museum versions within the next hours.