Eastleigh DentalLogo Design Contest

Thanks for the clever design. Can we try making the text a little bolder and less casual? Can we make the green closer to turquoise and is there a way of giving everything a 'metallic' look?

Thanks again, look forward to seeing some more designs from you!

Thank you for your quick feedback.

Please see my revisions on entry #22.
I'm not quite sure what do you mean by 'metallic' look, is it shiny look?

Thanks.

I'm sorry, I think the shiny look isn't blended enough on #22.

So, here is an update entry #23.

Thanks.

This looks good, but can we remove the shiny highlights from the lettering, and play around with the appearance of 'dental' to make it centred under 'Eastleigh'. Can you also do a few different fonts so we can see what works? We like the way this design is going. Thanks

Also can we try a few combinations of capital and lower case lettering, and play around with their distances from each other and the 'apple'

I'm sorry the wording on #27 is not quite centre.

Here is the update revisions. #32

looking better already... Our favourite aspect of your design is the apple symbol. Below is a link to our favourite logo. Is there any way you can give us something like this, using your apple symbol?

In particular we like
1) soften the harshness of the black background with a 'spotlight' effect
2) the way the text is put together and the font
3) the colourful symbol style - perhaps try this instead of the shiny look

http://www.spoonfeddesign.com/daily-inspiration-cocoa-stuff

the apple and the background look brilliant now, thank you very much.

we now feel that the colours of the text do not seem to match the symbol any more, so can we try a few different colours of the lettering and see what works?

great work

i think the text also needs to be a little larger to make it easier to read. thanks

thanks for the re-design, but we feel the text still doesn't quite match the symbol very well. can we try
1) removing the capital letters E and D and replacing with e and d
2) can we try the font from design 17
3) can you suggest a completely different colour scheme of your choice for everything - bright and bold. we are happy to see your suggestions. this is just to see what other possibilities there are. even the pink/brown scheme in the link we sent you is worth considering?

thanks

My update revisions on #40 #41

I'll post some update when I found a better treatment on the color and layout variations.

Thank you!

thanks we look forward to seeing it. But we are thinking that because of the changes we asked you to make the logo is becoming too much like it was for a food or restaurant business instead of a dental practice.

can we see a version as follows:
Background colour from 34
Lettering style and colour from 34 (but a little bigger)
Apple style and colour from 27

thanks