Like very much the mountain/trees depiction. Don't like the proportion of the mountain to the lettering (mountain seems to short or somehting, can't quite put my finger on it). Would like to see what can be done with the tagline added ("bringing order and calm to your cash flow"). And try it with the words next to the pictoral vs under it. Font could be a bit less serious. Colors in the scene could be a bit less subtle. Great start, thank you!
thank you very much for the feedback. I have made the changes you suggested and will be happy to show you any additional variations that you wish to see...
Would like to see the pictoral without a border and maybe dimensions that are a bit more square vs rectangular. Would appreciate seeing East Beckwith in all caps, as well as darker and Associates w/a smaller font size, darker and a version w/the same color as East BEckwith (i.e. not the grey).
#13. Like the font colors. Like the borderless square shape, but am thinking maybe try the pictoral overall a bit bigger. Try the font color w/initial cap on East Beckwith. Like Associates spread across best (what's that called? can't remember). Like the trees in #11 and am thinking a wee bit more sky might be good.
#23. Would like to see it w/softer sides (i.e., the left most tree height shrunk? and the slope of the right side made steeper). Trying to figure out how to incorporate the concept of cash in the pictoral and wondering if the trees can be represented by dollar signs? Like the 3-tier name. Like the font but am also wondering what a much more flowy font would do -- not so staid. Hope this feedback makes sense. This process is something! Thanks for your entries.
okay, the dollar signs idea didn't work. And on the slope and tree height --- I was really just thinking of a wee pruning shears on the tip of the highest tree --- I like that they rise up the mountains. #23 really is the one I like best. How about trying a couple birds in flight on the mountain? Also, same font color for the whole name Darker font color Font with some movement in it.
#112 and #113 are fascinating. I really appreciate the thought and creativilty that is encompassed in them. For me, they feel too 'corporate' which I don't know how to explain other than to state it. I don't quite know what to suggest (could be I'm punch drunk from looking at all the design entries! This process is pretty overwhelming.). Thank you.