#1 This concept is clever but I think the golf ball needs to be more visual. A first glance it difficult to identify the ball & tee, as the wings are so prominent. I'm just thinking from the point of view of quickly looking at the logo when walking past shop entrance. Definitely the right direction though......
#1 After looking back at your logos, I prefer the prominent eagle wings on #1 and I also like the simplicity of the shapes and how you have captures the ball & tee in the negative. I think this is closest to the brief given, but would appreciate other suggestions......