E & J UndergroundLogo Design Contest

how about my new design, do you like this?

Thanks for selecting me as one of finalist, let me know if any revision for improve my designs, waiting for your feedback, Thank you!

how about this one?

any feedback for requested?

Hello Chadlinz,

Thanks for your feedback, very helpful
please check my latest entry and let me know if there are any other updates you'd like to see.

Hello! I like the bold and simplistic look of the lettering, but I might like the and sign to be a little smaller. I would like to showcase the E J part. Or maybe disconnect the E and the and sign. Could you keep this as an option and then add another tweaked version of this? (Cause I do like this original one as well). Thanks!

Hi..
could you please give me your general opinion on my various designs. What you like and dislike in addition to the specific changes your requested?
If you would like any changes please let me know, looking forward your feedback. Thank you!

Kind Regards,
Fatart