Not really.... It looks good to me so far. One other thing. I was wondering if 1 or 2 sparkles we best... maybe 1 in the best place? Do you have other sparkles? Something determined.
I like these flames, but maybe without the flame drops. or maybe with only one flame drop. I like the idea of a sparkle maybe... maybe one on the film, or maybe on the rim, You are doing well, by showing me different colors. It seems like the orange fiery looks is still in 1st, Do you know if embossed on the name would look good or no? We are definitely narrowing it down.
This so far is the winning design. Do you have any other types of flames for the mouth of Dragon? Also, What if you leave the design alone & just try a few different color schemes? Like maybe a Green shades for dragon, different ring color, maybe a star-sparkle on something? maybe the film? Then I will have an idea of the best colors. thanks
yep, I'll probably be able to finish this weekend, I've got a few variants to choose from.... So unless you come up with a few tweaks or ideas, which would be cool for future ideas! This contest will end soon. I'm going to work soon & will check back this evening at 5-7pm CST which I believe is early morning for you. I think we are 12 hours apart in time.
Hello again,
when in 1 on 1 project is ok if communicate message or calls.. :)
because that not competitions. but that can we discuss after the contest ended.. Thank you
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
yeah thats, much closer! thats pretty cool. I imagine the wings more spread out, but looking good. So when you your'e working 1 on 1 with clients, do you only communicate by messages or calls too?
Kind of like that, but the ring around the logo would be the camera lens ring. so it would look like a phones or maybe fire/eagle in the reflection of lens.
Thank you so much.
Yes if you come with more sketch , that will be better.
because sometimes, we should find your taste.. find what design that you want.. it need time. of course as designer we shlud know what the client want.. and sometimes our proposal is not what client want..
but in this contest I'm really appreciate your responsive feedback, that really help..
if you have other revisions please let me know..
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
By the way, I liked the phoenix idea, because the mythical bird represents rising from the ashes. Which is something I am personally experiencing with this business. Originally, I thought the reflection of a phoenix rising in a circle/ lens looking logo, would have been cool, but maybe to hard to explain.
This has been fun! The logo has come a long way & looks pretty impressive! I am heading to work this morning in about an hour & half, Well, its "Morning for me 6:30am
"I hope your'e having a nice day so far. We may or may not need the FULL final phase, as you are clearly going to be the winner. I guess, WE can use this time to polish up the logo with anything absolute final touches & get then get the files in as many formats need to cover any marketing materials. I'm glad that you re-submitted those other two, showing me what could have been possible. You never know, I might change, or update/modify this later. In the beginning, I wanted something MUCH like what you've made, except where it looks like your'e looking at a lens almost. That was difficult to explain, in the early phases as I didn't know what you/we would come up with. I've learned to be more prepared with sketches next time, but your work looks really good though. Any last ideas, please share/show them, It's nice to take a brief concepts with me as I may sketch out more ideas & hire you again for the future.
Nice, we could have turned this one into a great logo if we had more time. You had many good thoughts along the way. Hopefully if I ever need revisions to the final selection, I will find you & get you to help, if you want to in the future.
I think I like the lighter blue solid. I also as we start to finish, what the word DYNAMIC would look like straight on the D & the C, Also what do you think about the LOGO being a circle? Would that work well?
*** this is kind of what I was talking about, regarding the WING... see how this wing tapers in one direction? Can you Taper the current wing in #500 similar? It can taper in either direction-- left to right OR right to left. Does that make sense?
So far you have been basically the SOLE designer submitting designs & edits. This #500 & 496 so far seem to be my favorite at this point, with a few more revisions. There are less than 12 hours remaining in the current phase & I don't think the other designers even WISH to TRY to compete with you/ your work. How many years have you been a designer?
There is a few more edits I'd like to try if you can follow along... I would like to see a different font on EST. 2018,
IF you can put a tiny bit more space between the wings-- making the last bottom wing slightly bigger than the others.
* On the CURVE of the dragon body above the C in Dynamic, If there is a way to improve, "that the tail & the body look more "connected" Before you try, does that make sense?
Yes, that's true. I like both, the curve & straight. Maybe I need to just see them side by side. I think I understand what you mean-- maybe you can send me a comparison?
I certainly don't want to let it get too busy... Like we said before, if it's too busy, it may become difficult to print or transfer correct?
for me, I like the curve in photography .. also in the bottom of Dynamic but the top straight..
straight title also good, that simple not to busy..
everythin is about the taste :)..
It's ok. The bowtie shape on the title is fine for now. I just wanted you & I to have a few design variants to pick from in the end Do you think the straight title looks better?.
You can always remove it if you can't improve it... If that makes sense. I think the longer tail is fine. I liked that you curved the EST. I guess what I was trying to accomplish yesterday, was in talking about the Dragon & its fluidity WAS trying to describe the Dragon as a "whole" might look a little better to me, if it was shaped more like a fluid letter S. In other words more symmetrical.
Hey, Im just coming back to this one as a contender design. This & the other one where you moved the slogan to the middle of logo. Which design numbers do you like the best so far?
Yes as in reference to to University of Florida Blue or better yet try this: https://cssgradient.io/shades-of-blue/ Try Crayola Blue, or maybe Dodger Blue-- just around the boarder.
Dragons do not have external ears. As with snakes, an internal mechanism detects sounds. From the outside, the only evidence of this mechanism is a tiny hole between the scales. If you google this, you will find.
FL. Gator Blue, slightly darker might look good too, like
true blue, or just the Blue boarder around the logo. I will check again today, when I return from work about 4:30pm CST.
It's okay. The phoenix is cool. I like the sharp edges... This one looks part Dragon, part phoenix. I'm sure you will think of something creative.. like you did on the dragon.
I know some fire from the mouth of the dragon is different in some designs... I think I like this fire better. I also like sharp points & edges on wings, horns & fire etc.
I like the idea of an eagle, I do! Nice color. Im just not sure if the FILM looks as well with the eagle as it does with the Dragon. Maybe the eagle could be screaming/ look meaner?
I'm so sorry. This is my first logo like this, when I print things, can't I print in color? In what case would I need to print in B&W? I apologize for any confusion, I want to make sure I understand you fully. Thanks.
Hello again,
when you pick the design absolutely you will get the variations for that logo. what I mean is variations for using in Black BG, White BG also if you need B n W versions. to make sure that the logo able to use in your printing materials. also when you have problem when print the logo, I'll pleasure to further assistance..
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
Also, as we progress, I am thinking of questions. Once the logo is done & chosen, I get all the files, but for example on this one like the others, they are on the black background... Will the finished logo appear on black, or just in the shape of a "wheel" as it is in the center? I'm curious about it for things like T-Shirts, stickers, business cards, website etc.
Ohh wow, I didn't EVEN notiice the wings on this one until just now! that is an interest twist. You might have to tell me what changes you make, because I might not notice. Oh & I also just noticed the FIRE of the Dragon is different. Its cool. Maybe, from here out, you can point out the subtle differences & I can mark my favorite variations. I will start referencing/ writing down, or completely eliminating others, as long as we reference the design number, it should be ok. The logo is really looking cool. Can you think of any other colors it would also look good in?
This one & #452 are both in the running for 1st so far! If you decide to work on it, or play around with it, I would be happy to see your artistry with the colors.. I do really like how you came up with the FILM as the Dragon body, that was a great idea! This one almost as a globe like shape. The blue definitely helps it pop.
Anyway, besides these two, It's not 100% necessary, yet If you have time & want to work on something, you could play around with the logo with the Phoenix or Eagle & make it similar to this one, just different creatures for a side by side compassion
So Far the dragon remains 1st, but I like the ring around it, I like the idea of the Phoenix, or an Eagle, but I'm not sure how to really make it DYNAMIC like you probably can :)
Im looking at the Dragon where the "film" meets the neck of the dragon & the bottom meet the lettering & wondering if it could curve just a little more as the two segue way? what do you think?
Attention Finalists! Those designers remaining in the TOP 5. I ask that you to use this time to put any final touches on your submissions, if you have a completely different design idea & wish to submit that, feel free to let your creativity run wild. This phase is where I want to see what makes you the BEST in your craft to me. This logo may even end up a franchise someday & while all logos can be easily modified, it's that first impression that builds a BRAND. That's the goal here, it is to use a great logo to re-brand, build prospects & ultimately win clients. Thank you for your continued efforts. Congrats on making it this far! Now let's see who can take home the WIN. Good Luck Everyone!
Hello again,
Thank you so much for your continue feedback..
yes sure with pleasure will work on it..
also in every design no matter, I'll also provide that use solid color so that can be use in any media..:)
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
I also like the added little detail like sharp the points eyes, & other detail looks good. I imagine it will look good on print. I wonder if it will look good on all mediums. You have done good work. The final phase has begun. There are some really good designs in the 2nd phase, but only 5. So just do what you can to submit your best ideas or revisions.
something about this one the colors dont draw me in. I also wonder what it would would like with just a few blues in there? I like the black back ground it sits on. it could even be a little larger maybe.
Hello again,
Thank you so much for your continue feedback..
I mean if that from other designer idea, you can't share it to other designer... you just give direction to me what would you like to see
with reference from your idea, or might from out of this contest.
because this is competitions, if I combine with other designer idea that wil be not fair. except that combining from my concept..
if all my design not yet in your taste, I;ll try other concept.
may be you want to see other animals? or something?
oh you know what would look cool on this one is fading the cat/jaquars fur into the lens. with the name bold at the Botton making it all and abstract lens or something. I may have to run another contest to sort through.... If I could combine the ideas of several into one logo, I would have exactly what I want, but you say you cant see other artist until nest phase I guess.
ah I see. So can you make the camera shape the actual shape of the business card. So in other words when I hand someone a business card, they can say, oh its the shape of a camera instead of the traditional rectangular business card. Does that make sense?
Hello again,
Thank you for your feedback.. the contest is blind, also please don't reference other entries, that will be violation.just give me feedback
I'll pleasure to improve it :)
Thank you
Best Regards
Amanterkendali
Maybe its the font on these new ones, maybe Im not making sense.... Im linking the variates of bird, I just think it all needs to be encapsulated. Im thinking the edge of the business cards/ stickers etc should be the outline of a camera body with the lens in the center & in some way reflects the animal, Phoenix, dragon, lion, etc with the name. Can you see the other entries yet or is it still blind? I will post this in the public forum.
Thanks & hopefully you seen my other suggestions. I really want to make this logo so good, it could be a sticker! I will be using clever marketing, so my logo will be center to my name & getting business. You are on to something good! Keep doing what you can to make them stand out strong & clear & Unique.
The second wing on the phoenix looks cool. My mind is reeling with wild ideas on this one, maybe part bird, part drone. Your work remains in the top so far. This logo will be seen by everyone I pass on the road & it's starting to look real good... I hope you can knock it out of the ball park!
If you will keep tweeking this one, Im wondering what different fonts will look best? The A may need a little more definition. Keep in mind I may used the chosen logo to turn into a vehicle wrap so design will need to look great on any & all marketing including the vehicle. Thanks for submitting!
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how do you think?
if just the sparkles, can this fixing in the final files?
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when in 1 on 1 project is ok if communicate message or calls.. :)
because that not competitions. but that can we discuss after the contest ended.. Thank you
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Yes if you come with more sketch , that will be better.
because sometimes, we should find your taste.. find what design that you want.. it need time. of course as designer we shlud know what the client want.. and sometimes our proposal is not what client want..
but in this contest I'm really appreciate your responsive feedback, that really help..
if you have other revisions please let me know..
Best Regards
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"I hope your'e having a nice day so far. We may or may not need the FULL final phase, as you are clearly going to be the winner. I guess, WE can use this time to polish up the logo with anything absolute final touches & get then get the files in as many formats need to cover any marketing materials. I'm glad that you re-submitted those other two, showing me what could have been possible. You never know, I might change, or update/modify this later. In the beginning, I wanted something MUCH like what you've made, except where it looks like your'e looking at a lens almost. That was difficult to explain, in the early phases as I didn't know what you/we would come up with. I've learned to be more prepared with sketches next time, but your work looks really good though. Any last ideas, please share/show them, It's nice to take a brief concepts with me as I may sketch out more ideas & hire you again for the future.
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sorry late reply your message, just back to my computer..
2.13 am now here..
is that you mean like this?#513
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#508 update with the white gloss in film
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Thank you so much..
I'm join in LT since 2011 :)
sure will work on it
Best Regards
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So far you have been basically the SOLE designer submitting designs & edits. This #500 & 496 so far seem to be my favorite at this point, with a few more revisions. There are less than 12 hours remaining in the current phase & I don't think the other designers even WISH to TRY to compete with you/ your work. How many years have you been a designer?
There is a few more edits I'd like to try if you can follow along... I would like to see a different font on EST. 2018,
IF you can put a tiny bit more space between the wings-- making the last bottom wing slightly bigger than the others.
* On the CURVE of the dragon body above the C in Dynamic, If there is a way to improve, "that the tail & the body look more "connected" Before you try, does that make sense?
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[So that EST can be seen a little more. ]
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the difficulty in printer is if too much effect..
for curve or not I think that' not the problem.
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I certainly don't want to let it get too busy... Like we said before, if it's too busy, it may become difficult to print or transfer correct?
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straight title also good, that simple not to busy..
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so you want to go with the straight title?
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might what I mean is not ears but like feathers on a dragon. I'll try to improve it
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Dragons do not have external ears. As with snakes, an internal mechanism detects sounds. From the outside, the only evidence of this mechanism is a tiny hole between the scales. If you google this, you will find.
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Thank you so much for your continue feedback..
is that you mean like this?#484 , #485
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true blue, or just the Blue boarder around the logo. I will check again today, when I return from work about 4:30pm CST.
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I mean the phoenix in half water and fire :)
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is this understandable?
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when you pick the design absolutely you will get the variations for that logo. what I mean is variations for using in Black BG, White BG also if you need B n W versions. to make sure that the logo able to use in your printing materials. also when you have problem when print the logo, I'll pleasure to further assistance..
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Anyway, besides these two, It's not 100% necessary, yet If you have time & want to work on something, you could play around with the logo with the Phoenix or Eagle & make it similar to this one, just different creatures for a side by side compassion
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I alreay make a little round side in the wings here #455
how do you think? I'll make the other part more fluid..
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with pointer eyes also. curve name
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sometimes might if you need it as watermark, or when you need it for spot UV in Business card? ..
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Thank you so much for your continue feedback..
yes sure with pleasure will work on it..
also in every design no matter, I'll also provide that use solid color so that can be use in any media..:)
Best Regards
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do you prefer more abstract design?
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Thank you so much for your continue feedback..
I mean if that from other designer idea, you can't share it to other designer... you just give direction to me what would you like to see
with reference from your idea, or might from out of this contest.
because this is competitions, if I combine with other designer idea that wil be not fair. except that combining from my concept..
if all my design not yet in your taste, I;ll try other concept.
may be you want to see other animals? or something?
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do you want bold font, or rustic theme?
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also.. :)
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Thank you for your feedback.. the contest is blind, also please don't reference other entries, that will be violation.just give me feedback
I'll pleasure to improve it :)
Thank you
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oh I see, will try to improve it :)
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I'll improve it..
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Thank you so much for your feedback..
yes sure will improve the entries :)
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