Dreamscape BandLogo Design Contest

All right, I'll cut it.It's big for me too.

Maybe not as big? It looks like you just increased the font size & so the stroke width is bigger - and the d is not even straight

Is this size okay?

Ok

yes - thank you - but still want the "d" to be bigger..

I am not sure I will like it better, but just want to see before I decide. Thanks

like this ?

No, it is not. I asked for just the FIRST letter, the “D“ to be lowercase - not the entire word

If you have any suggestions feel free to say so.

This is just an example, I think I sent as you requested.

I had just meant the first d - not the whole word.

hi Kica, 3 things;

could you make that orange part of the heart red (CC0000) instead?

- could you please make the "D" bigger?

And, may I please see a variation using a (larger) lower case "d" also?

THANK YOU!

Thanks for the ranking.

great! thanks

VERY sorry I am not being more clear..

DO want the "s" a bit larger (but not as big as the D) - then make it form the heart like it did before..

I still wanted the heart, just not as big

like this

OK that's the right idea - thank you!

Now, make the "S" smaller, so it's more like the width of the right/orange side of the heart - just so it looks a little less like "DreamScape" & more like "Dreamscape"

Maybe for now get rid of the "live band for weddings and parties". And make the big word "band" smaller and more to the right.

awesome!

it's the "ape" - too low - want it to be in line with the "Dreamsc"..

& maybe reduce size or make the S less bold/big somehow

this c is too high - or maybe the "ape" is too low

Ok

I think this is heading the wrong direction. Everyone is going to Helvetica I need to somehow stop that. Also preferred the capital "D" I think by trying to put both the note and the heart in there that it's just getting too much.

ok

I honestly don't know which "S" I like better, this one or the other one – this one almost looks like a completely different font.. but I do like how you incorporated the note – clever. Also like how on this one the "c" falls in line horizontally, where the other one was somewhat raised. But I kind of think I might like the S on the old one.. Just not 100% sure

thank you, this is amazing!

I do really like it & am sorry I don't know what to tell you to try to improve it. thank you!

ok

I'll try to change.

Ok.

and sorry for another comment - but ultimately this is going against a darker background so will probably in the end be more white on black versus black on white. please see their website dreamscapeband.com THANKS

this almost has too many things going on. All of them are clever but too much at the same time. I don't know if this makes any sense but you could – possibly – make a note out of the "d" in band. No idea if that would be good or not.

So like this one, I like the note – but to me the heart was more endearing.. Also here I don't understand all the emphasis on the "C" maybe that's to mean audio or something, but it just seems too much emphasis there.. PS: I don't think you need to worry so much about the "live band for weddings and parties" part. That's something I can Photoshop in later. I'm looking for the overall design mostly - thanks !!

I love this & love the heart - on other ones you were filling in the "C" and I have gotten a lot of other submissions that have crescents, I don't know why that's the case obviously someone got the idea somewhere that I wanted that. I also like the note, but at the same time the heart is very cool too. & maybe both are too much..

If you have any suggestions feel free to say so.

Thank you .

thanks!

Yes this is one word. I just used S for the heart. I'll send another variant.

Really like this with the heart.. Dreamscape is all one word, not sure if what looks like a capital S is a problem for me or not.

🤔 but DO love the ❤️