Much better! Love the overall body. The title looks great. Those two outer edges feel like the wings. Can you have them match the body and then make some of the inner portions another color?
Hi llanfranc, Thank you so much for all your feedback, these are the change. #165 , #166 , #167
I redraw the left side, change the building to dragon wing.
More feedback are welcome.
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I like the way there is two tones of green on the legs and head. If you could just tweak the shell frame work to make the dragon parts pop from the rest of the framework. I feel like there is a bit of silver needed on the right and a some green needed on the left.
This is kind of like what I'm saying. The dragon pops. I don't like these color for this project. The popping needs to happen with the correct parts of the image.
I like the pops of darker color in the legs and head. Don't like this font. Prefer the font that is in the #115. I would still really like for you to make all the parts in the shell that are the dragons's shades of green. The parts in the shell that aren't the dragons, should be another color. Like the silver already there.
Oooohhh. Getting so close. Like the second green accent. I feel like the far left part of the shell has a kind of wing look. Maybe that is green. And maybe something right behind the the dragon body has the silver look to it? Do you think the tortoise's eyes should have some color?
I like the added detail, though I think the legs still need adjustment. Can you identify all of the dragon on the inside of the shell, and give it a color. And make the 13 a more pronounced aspect of that color. And I'd like for parts of dragon to wrap around the rest of the center of the shell?
Hey Light! Thank you for your hard work. I'll be straight up, your design is my favorite so far. The key things I want to focus on are:
1. The intricacy of the detail in the figure. Particularly the dragon. I'd very much for the dragon to be in the foreground and background of the design.
2. Colors. Picking the most complimentary colors/metallics.
3. And font/s. I think there are better options in here.
Like the lines. Wrong kind of western. One of these colors is off. Try working a purple and/or some metallic. Hope to see some multidimension to the logo in the future.
One of the greens is the wrong tone. And the red seems off. Maybe something more metallic? Also, for font when I said "western" I didn't mean Western like a John Wayne movie. More like Americas/Europe vs. Asia.
Oohh. This design is my current favorite. You're the first to really work this concept in. I'm curious to see if you can play with the fonts, a bit. Perhaps give them a more Western feel.
I love the design, even if it a bit too cutesy for what I'm wanting. Can you try to redo the creature but it get from overhead? I want a lot of the design to be in the shell. I do like the colors and the fonts are solid.
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can you PM me your email address?
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But how much you gonna paying me?
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I was curious to see if your interested in me still paying you something for your finished product. I wouldn't mind having it as a back-up.
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For now I do not have a website.
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I do graphic design and 3D.
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1. The intricacy of the detail in the figure. Particularly the dragon. I'd very much for the dragon to be in the foreground and background of the design.
2. Colors. Picking the most complimentary colors/metallics.
3. And font/s. I think there are better options in here.
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