Dr Thomas Schell & Dr Patrick Noble, PLLCLogo Design Contest

Hi.
Here is my design for your logo project (#1). Thank you in advance for your consideration and feedback!
By the way, I am also a dental hygienist here in Georgia :)

Thanks Janis (?) I just found your comment, this (#1) is a beautiful idea, thank you!

Thank you for your feedback on my design. I've arranged the feathers in the shape of a heart. I will continue to work on this as long as it interests you!
Janis

Thanks Janis

I like the color change, the heart i've decided against, thanks for trying it.

I will continue to explore designs for your logo, thank you for taking the time to comment.

Hi again, I left a general message re "white feather" in the contest comment line. Also, possibly, softer, less pointy, less sharp with the feather?

i wonder could the feathers appear more fluffy? less pointy or sharp? I might like a blue sky with a pure white feather up there...

another variation...maybe dandelion seeds floating by?

I will work on variations of my feather and submit soon, thanks again for your helpful comments!

nice.

maybe on #1 make the tagline a little more bold? maybe a slightly smaller feather?

also on #1 maybe try a version wth a full color (not so misty) just to see for comparison

maybe try the schellnoble from #2 under the #1 graphic?

I've uploaded a couple of new designs with your suggestions. I am looking at other font styles for the tagline and will upload one more soon.

like. I'm not sure how this would look but would it be possible to free the sky up? (not "box it in")?

RE #1 Thanks for the new design, I think maybe I wasnt clear, I still like the sky blue and the cloud white (or clear) but the sky has a sharp, distinct edge around it. could the sky fade out or maybe utilizing brush strokes it could fade/blend into a white background?

I hear what you are saying, will keep working on it, thanks!

hi Janis; my Partner (pat Noble) likes this although he feels that the "Dentistry with a gentle touch" should be highlighted. (maybe as even more important than our names) thanks

I'm on it, thanks for all of your comments!

thank you again.

would it be possible to go super simple? how about the name, all one color, with one blue (small) feather above?

Absolutely. If you end up going with my design, you could use the feather in several different ways, for instance, a watermark on letterhead. You could also use the multiple feathers floating down for website.
Just some ideas.
I'll work on a super simple version and send it over directly.

the feather could look a bit more distinct although not pointy (hard to describe) also I like the font in "dentistry with a gentle touch" in #2 best however I think maybe it could just be bigger... hmmm 2 lines? longer but center justified? I agree people need to see what were about more readily without the words looking too blocky; they still should appear 'gentle' thanks again

i think I might still prefer the schellnoble blue/purple or vice versa best instead of the all blue as well.

#113
Hi.
I've made a slight change in the orientation of the feathers drifting down, as well as the colors. I'll continue to work with you to get the design exactly as you envision. Thanks again for all of your feedback!
Janis