Try using the word “cares” in the logo, Dr. Dave cares. There is potential in this one as we like the softness of the line But it’s placement is a bit too tight to the words. We need the logo to have more presence and graphical interest, but we like that you have created a unique look. So keep the ideas coming.
Add an “s” to care so it says cares. We also don’t want the “cares” to be too overpowering. So try it in grey or a lighter shade of the same blue that is used for Dr. Dave. And we are wanting a bit more of a statement. If you can think of a way to create more interest with the line, we are open to see more of your ideas.