Entry #11: There’s a lot of potential here. -We like that it’s unique and distinct. -Try having a line across the A to make it look more like an A., maybe Dave should be bigger. -Keep working on this one to make it more unique, and standout.
#64: We like what’s happening with the look of both of these ones (#65 too), but leaning towards #64 because its a little softer in feeling with the swoops on the letters. -Try making Dr. blue -Try making cares bigger (#65 has the cares bigger and Dave likes that). -Try different looks with the letter extensions on the A and V. Maybe make one longer, one shorter or something…just to see how it looks.
For both #73 and 75 - Could you try a lighter font for the cares? And try a lower case dr. instead of Dr. just to see what that does to the arrangement or both.
For #73 only: Try "cares" on the other side of the A. And keeping it the same except make the “A" extension like the one in #75.
Thanks for trying everything, we are really liking your work.
#121 - is our preference, but can we see this exact one with the A extension more like #114 please. So it’s shorter, but keep it an equal distance at the top and bottom of each extension from the V. The bottom A extension seems to be a bit tighter to the V when the extension is shorter. We’d like to be not so tight. (Hope that makes sense.) - #124 is nice too - we like the dots. Perhaps make the cares a bit smaller to balance out.
Keep #125 as is - we keep coming back to this one as well.
Those are our top 3 from all your designs so far. Thanks for all the revisions!
Keeping #186 as is, please do the following variations: -cares in lower case - replace the word “cares” with the word “Currie" in the all caps: show one variation as the same size as cares, and one with it a bit bigger. -Create #186 in all black and then in grey tones. -Use three different colour combinations of your choice for #186.