Hi I like this orange and grey colour palette. Can we please also experiment with the lime (yellowie/green) and greys as suggested in the brief. Perhaps with the grey/charcoal as the dominate background colour? The handle in entry 12 is too think and needs some work. The font characters need to be a little closer perhaps...
Please excuse how I try to articulate these next thoughts...
Could we look at making the drop pin and magnifying glass much much larger and more stylised and dominant whilst being less traditional.
I quite like the arrow concept in entry 12 for some reason.
I guess I'm after something very unique, very recognisable, very technology focused yet edgy and arty all at the same time.
Does this help with the direction in all 3 proposals.
Hi and thanks for the multiple submissions and for joining the contest... I see you potentially have a lot to offer.
I love the simple twist on the "ee" in see being tilted in #23 (that works very well)!
I also really like the individual letter characters of "d,o & e" I am not convinced on the "s" however... it looks too tight/narrow/small compared with the other wider characters. Can we use a 'fuller' "s"? More like the width of the "o, e or g" etc. Can we also have a longer tail on the "g" it seems too short or stubbed as the tag line doesn't quite fit underneath due to this.
The colour palette is almost spot on. Can the grey be pushed a little darker and more powerful please? Not much (just a touch blacker and marginally less blue).
I would be appreciative to see NEXA bold or light used as the primary typeface (for the do see go) in lowercase and/or upper case (could we please see it both ways?) as an alternative and in addition to the way it currently is? As I am tossing up between the two currently.
I would like to see the grey substantially darker and more powerful - its close but not quite there yet. Heading more toward black yet certainly not pure black (if that makes sense?)
The vibrancy of "see" (on #23) is working for me.
I think the letter characters should touch and slightly join/ overlap, in "see" as well in both do and go. With a very small space between each of the 3 words. isolating each word slightly
Finally I prefer at this point the alignment of the tag line underneath the do see go and lining up with the "d" and finishing just before the "go". Could we however also see it above the do see go starting at the end of the "d" this might mean that the 'neck' of the "d" may need to be a little higher/longer to accommodate?
I hope this helps with some proposed revisions. great work so far.