Hi I like this lime and grey colour palette. Can we please also perhaps explore with the grey/charcoal as the dominate background colour as I feel like the "see" gets lost and the "do and go" are a little over bearing.? The "g" in go seems too small relative to the other letters and needs some work. The font characters need to be a little closer perhaps...
Please excuse how I try to articulate these next thoughts...
Could we look at making the drop pin and magnifying glass much much larger and more stylised and dominant whilst being less traditional.
Explore other typeface options maybe (nexa bold) as it to has a cool and stylish "g"
I guess I'm after something very unique, very recognisable, very technology focused yet edgy and arty all at the same time.
Does this help with the direction? I did not really like entry 6 very much the drop pins seemed very distracting. Or something.
I thank you for joining the contest... I see you potentially have a lot to offer.
I am not too much of a fan of the icon logo... in #28, as it seems to be heading in a very galaxy (Saturn like, with stars) direction (which does not really address my core audience). I'd like to see this icon a little more stylised, modern, original, arty and edgier.
I am appreciative to see NEXA bold or light used as the primary typeface (for the do see go) in lowercase and/or upper case (could we please see it both ways?). I think now because of this I am pretty happy with that font choice moving forward.
I would like to see the grey substantially darker and more powerful - its close but not quite there yet. Heading more toward black yet certainly not pure black (if that makes sense?)
The "see" in that green (on #28) is working for me.
I think the letter characters should touch and slightly join, in "see" the same as you have in both do and go. With a very small space between each of the 3 words. isolating each word slightly. perhaps the two "ee" in see could be slightly tilted up wards? To emphasis this a little better, giving a little edge?
Finally I prefer at this point the alignment of the tag line underneath the do see go and lining up with the "d" and finishing just before the "go". It could move slightly more to the left lining up perfectly with the curve in the "d". And I also think this should be in capitals as in sample #18. Could we slightly tweak this font? A little thinner and crisper?
I hope this helps with some proposed revisions. great work so far.