DormaTarg, Inc.Logo Design Contest

Very neat! Please give me different color variations. I don't particularly like the color scheme. Also I'd like to see different ideas around this logo.

thanks for your feedback, for new update please see entry #44 #45 for color option and different font type
feel free for any comment

kindly regard
ketut

I wanted to see if you could get a little funky on this request....It may be too much but I wanted to see how it would look with very skinny veins interwoven through some of the Letters and tiny cancer cell metastases in various letters of DormaTarg like ("g", "D", "t"). And last thing.... I'd like to see some smaller cancer cells around the "O" like in #58.

Thank you sooooo much for all your entries. Excited to see your new creations.

ok than please see entry #92 #93 #94 #95 for new update

We have temporarily moved you into first but we would like to see more variations of this design please. Some of our team think its too long. Here are some suggestions:
1. Incorporate the target design with the "o" in dormatarg. But don't compromise readability....we need people to recognize it's and "O".
2. Make the letter size more like DormaTarg like in #29
3. Put "Targeting Cancer Recurrence between the new "O" and the "G"
4. Try making the current color scheme even more polished. almost reflective as if in a very clean laboratory. Good luck.

thanks for new rank and comment, please see entry #102 #103 cause i still confuse about your suggestion number 3, i still wondering what it :)
I will keep working on

regard
ketut

Keep the letter width in #95.
I'd like to see one design like this:
Dorma
Targ

I'd also like to see one where the bull's eye is around the D"o"rmaTarg.

I'm about to put you back in 1st. I just wanted to see if Shalvin could produce something. But I'm 95% sure we are going to go with one of your designs. But we need some improvements. We really like your design quality but we want to see some variations on the overall design.

Dear VCPartners

Thanks for your feedback, as we can see Shalvin was use bull's eye in first place starting contest, so i can't make the word "o" using bull's eye cause that's Shalvin concept. I hope you and your partner understand my position. I respect what other designer did(concept) so sorry if can't make base on your needs, so sorry.
If you needs other, feel free to contact me.

Hope this information help

kindly regard
ketut

please see my last entry started entry #102 #103 #104 #105 #106 #107 #108

Very close on 103. Make the font skinnier more like #95. and try extending the bulls eye lines like on #105 but make the downward crosshair red and the upwards cross hair black.

could you put me in 1? so i can submit changing base on your feedback

thanks for new rank, please see entry #116 #117 #118 #119

I think I like #95 the best but I like how you placed the T in the line on #103. I have two suggestions:

1. Also on #95, can I see one where the downward crosshairs are red and the upwards cross hair is black.

2. Can I see one variation with where the DormaTarg is stack like this
Dorma
Targ

could you put me in 1 rank so i can submit those changing

Okay, I changed your rank.

thanks for new rank, please see entry #136 #137 #139 #140 for new update base on your comment June 23rd, 2013, 6:53pm

sorry if i have withdraw some, cause close other designer did

regard
ketut