Way too much. Doesn't scream Restaurant, Bar, or Nightclub either. Im going to post a logo that will help you as far as what Im looking for. You've missed on both ends of the spectrum so far.
Here we go! Lets try this..... Give the fish a "Wyley Coyote" kind of face...Ie: Big goofy eyes, AND a Nicer but still cool grin on his face. Lets face him left way. Lets get "Dorados" Looking like a BRAND(iron) on his skin with a little smoke rising. Man I really think youre starting to make me happy
Like the expression the coyote has when he s been burned by the roadrunner. If you make Dorados larger and look like its been branded/grilled onto the fishs side......etc. keep the cool skeleton look but I thought some funny lookin eyes would be great with steam rising from the name/brand/grill marks