Donoghues Daimler HireLogo Design Contest

here for update

Is it possible to transplant your grille into the design currwntly in first place?

The thickness of the indicator lights in this one
....the weight of the line
....the pt.
...the thickness of the pencil
...the size of the brush stroke
...whatever it is.
please use the same size for everything else.
The grille and headlights are still to thick.

some reason i use thick is easy to embordir logo :)

keep update :)

I appreciate the efforts.
Thanks.

sorry for my bad :i will keep update entry

Im not sure your understanding me.
I would like to see everything have thinner lines. Everything is too thick.
And for everything use the same thin lines and circles.
Thanks.

here for thinner griller at bottom, hope this are wright track

Lettering is ok.

Please make everything thinner.
The grille and all the lights.
Its too heavy.
Cheers.

ehhm... :)

You will soon be able to see other designs during finals?
It would be good to see your grille in place of the design currently renked 1st

at entry #125

please see my new entry, still thinking about indicator light see too big???

I appreciate the effort. Thanks

ok working on

Looks better.
Thanks.
Can you make the grille and the headlights the same weight as the indicator lights? ...same line width?

don't confused, i just try giving some option on logo, feel free for any comments

remove slogan on logo

put indicator light

ok than here for update

ok than working on progress

Also, the position of the lights seem not right (do not match the actual car)

Dont like the shape of this grille.
Too triangular.

We have decided we dont like the slogan.
Please remove the slogan from and future designs.
Thanks

Like that its thinner.
Much better.
See comments on #67

Hi.
Ive had so many logos to go through im getting confused.
We like the shape of this grille (more true to the actual car) can you match the shape to an actual daimler 2.5 v8?
Also make the drawing less thick, and use the thickness all the same for all lights.
Also add the indicator lights.
Also use adobe hebrew bold for the lettering.
Thanks heaps.

here for update entry and some option on it

present how logo in gold color view :)

thanks for your feedback, working on it

Also keep all the line work the same pt?

Not liking the car on this one. Like the grille though.

Like this.
Nice and simple.
Would be nice to include the indicator lights too, and see some different fonts. Adobe hebrew bold or similar?