Great start. One of the best. Increase thickness and slightly "stretch" Domuso letters. Highlight edges of roof feature. Maybe put a slight mirroring on Empowering Renters? The logo looks a little flat so if you could work on making it pop out that would be great.
You made the roof look like a chimney. We just want the stem of the D to punch trough the roof line without the roof line running over it which makes it look like a chimney. Sorry if I was not clear.
for current # 40 can you make another option by highlighting the background of Domuso letters like you did for #32 and making the empowering letters a mirror look like #32
Ok we are almost there. Please replicate the coloring and highlighted elements you created for entry #41 onto #32. Do not change anything on #32 except the highlights and colors. We really like this one.