Maybe needs some tightening up, a little crisper, maybe a different font? Looks a little playful yet like a dave and buster font vs something a little vintage and sharper if that makes sense. Refine it a little more.
Simple, Professional, Classic. I'm really liking this. I also like the fact that it gives the ability to go on any background due to the outline separation. Can you plan around with the colors on a copy a little bit and maybe give it a little more pop. Design is great.
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