I don't want ANY background color. Keep everything, and keep the white INSIDE the circle, but remove all background color OUTSIDE the circle, including the brown that's behind the "mountain jewel" and "haitian coffee" words, so that when I print this on the brown bags, it will just be the bag color behind the logo.
Can you make the yellow/orange sun rays "fade in" like you did with #254... have a white glow at the center and then fade in with the rays. I think then we'll be done.
Sorry, I meant blue rays between the yellow, not over top of the yellow. So the rays from the Sun would alternate yellow blue yellow blue with no spaces between them
Really nice. Can you give me two more versions of this: one with the white MOUNTAIN JEWEL letters outlined in red, and another one with the MOUNTAIN JEWEL letters done in all-red.
Looks great. Two things:
- make the black border around the MOUNTAIN JEWEL lettering just a bit thicker.
- lighten up the red border a bit more. Try pure red - #FF0000 (255,0,0)
That's nice. Take all the graininess out of the white though. No scratching this, just a nice clean color. Same with the red around it. Also, brighten up the red border a bit. We're getting close, thanks for your work.
Make these changes to this one:
- inside of the circle even whiter. Nearly White, with just the tiniest hint of brown, to keep it from being so bright.
- make the MOUNTAIN JEWEL lettering white, with a thin black outline around each letter to set it off from the background
- change the color of the sun's Rays from yellow to orange-yellow
Same comment as the earlier one. Please brighten the inside of the circle even more with the Pantone 9180 color, and clean up the red border so it's not scratched.
In addition to the other things you'll do, please give us another version of this with "nearly" white inside the circle. Not pure white, but instead a much lighter shade of the Kraft brown. Something that will match the bag but is a lighter version, closer to white. The pure white in the other ones is too stark, we need a light off-white. Also, don't "distress" the brown/white inside the bag (but the distressed look of the yellow border is good)
In addition to the other things you'll do, please give us another version of this with "nearly" white inside the circle. Not pure white, but instead a much lighter shade of the Kraft brown. Something that will match the bag but is a lighter version, closer to white. The pure white in the other ones is too stark, we need a light off-white. Also, don't "distress" the brown/white inside the bag (but the distressed look of the red border is good)
We will go with a version of this but we need some options. PLEASE do the following:
1. Make another version with red (the same red used here for the sun) between the outer/inner border circles. Everything else the same.
2. Another version same as above, but this time change the sun's rays to yellow.
3. Versions of both the above but also with a bit more green on the mountaintops.
Also, try putting the same red between the circles as you have for the sun's rays, and then change the Sun's Rays to Yellow. Just want to see different variations of this. I think this is the final form we just need to get the colors right for the circle and the Sun
Please try:
- white lettering (all words)
- color the space between the outer and inner circles blue (so the border around the logo is brown/blue/brown
- yellow sun rays
- make the green on the mountain peaks a little "greener".
This is our favorite so far. We need a few variations of this:
1. Change the darker interior of the circle to the lighter-brown Kraft color, leaving everything else the same.
2. Do another version of the above, but change the interior of the circle to white (but leave the Kraft brown color behind the words "MOUNTAIN JEWEL".
3. Do another version of each of the above, but change the sun's rays from dark brown to yellow, and alternating yellow/red.
Nice but we brought the mountain down too much toward the cup. Leave some space between the cup and the bottom of the mountain, like in previous version.
Nice. Can you make the green mountain peaks more visible? You could increase the height of the mountain a bit and make the red lines a little shorter.
ALSO - make one version like that (as described above) and make another one the same but make the interior of the circle the same "Kraft" color as the larger background. So the only really dark colors in that one would be the outlines, the upper parts of the mountain under the green peaks, and the coffee cup/saucer.
Please change the white background color to the light-brown bag color, so I can see how this will look on the bag.
ALSO, I would like to add a bit more color as well. Some red, or green, or blue. Not too much, but as an accent. The Haitian mountains have green peaks. Maybe make the peaks of the mountains green, and see what it looks like if you change the white lines over the mountain peaks to a nice earthy red.
This is good. Please leave this one (for comparison) but also make another one like this, but with the background behind the text is fully white, like in your #158.
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I don't want ANY background color. Keep everything, and keep the white INSIDE the circle, but remove all background color OUTSIDE the circle, including the brown that's behind the "mountain jewel" and "haitian coffee" words, so that when I print this on the brown bags, it will just be the bag color behind the logo.
You're right, excuse me.
- make the black border around the MOUNTAIN JEWEL lettering just a bit thicker.
- lighten up the red border a bit more. Try pure red - #FF0000 (255,0,0)
https://www.officedepot.com/a/products/993562/Folgers-Classic-Roast-Coffee-48-Oz/;jsessionid=0000itaGiiXoMdOMSqstksvQ0t8:17h4h7ado
- inside of the circle even whiter. Nearly White, with just the tiniest hint of brown, to keep it from being so bright.
- make the MOUNTAIN JEWEL lettering white, with a thin black outline around each letter to set it off from the background
- change the color of the sun's Rays from yellow to orange-yellow
Give me one like that and also one more like that but with a clean (not scratched) red outline in the circle
I was not home because of private obligations. If I forget something, tell me.
I have some business trip today morning, afternoon I will send other versions, like you requested.
1. Make another version with red (the same red used here for the sun) between the outer/inner border circles. Everything else the same.
2. Another version same as above, but this time change the sun's rays to yellow.
3. Versions of both the above but also with a bit more green on the mountaintops.
- white lettering (all words)
- color the space between the outer and inner circles blue (so the border around the logo is brown/blue/brown
- yellow sun rays
- make the green on the mountain peaks a little "greener".
1. Change the darker interior of the circle to the lighter-brown Kraft color, leaving everything else the same.
2. Do another version of the above, but change the interior of the circle to white (but leave the Kraft brown color behind the words "MOUNTAIN JEWEL".
3. Do another version of each of the above, but change the sun's rays from dark brown to yellow, and alternating yellow/red.
So, there should be a total of six new versions.
ALSO - make one version like that (as described above) and make another one the same but make the interior of the circle the same "Kraft" color as the larger background. So the only really dark colors in that one would be the outlines, the upper parts of the mountain under the green peaks, and the coffee cup/saucer.
https://www.northatlanticbags.com/product/kraft-bag-12oz
Please change the white background color to the light-brown bag color, so I can see how this will look on the bag.
ALSO, I would like to add a bit more color as well. Some red, or green, or blue. Not too much, but as an accent. The Haitian mountains have green peaks. Maybe make the peaks of the mountains green, and see what it looks like if you change the white lines over the mountain peaks to a nice earthy red.
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