#22 - The ring version is nice but with out the points. Can you make a jagged break in the ring look? Maybe try using a serif font or using small caps on one of the words? Want to avoid a corporate look.
#27 - The heart is great. Maybe in shades of red ( a dull, grayed down, faded red). I think the font is too corporate looking again.
#29 - The overall idea is right on, but the font is too corporate and the hand inside the heart doesn’t work.
I like #45 - Can you break the ring in 2 pieces so like in #22 but without the pointy ends? Can you replace the gray with a brownish red?
Also on #45 - Can you do a version where the ring is replaced by the broken heart? The hears could be in a shade of the brownish red that will match the font.
Hi - so far I like your design the best. Please take a look at #125 which is a take-off of yours. I like that ring better because it reads more like a wedding ring. Can you do something like that? Maybe you can make the break of the ring more jagged and not such a straight cut.