Hi there, thanks for your entry. this is very creative and looks visually appealing. We like the concept with the graphic. Dive and World need to be the same size I think. Also, we would prefer to have scuba diving, spearfishing, freediving as small text (not diving the world together as per our original brief). The colours are good.
We are impressed by the graphics and the link between the fish and the diver (although the dolphin probably isn't appropriate and should be a ray or some other kind of fish - you see dolphins at seaworld if you know what i mean). We would also like to see the borders removed and have the font and the graphics on a white background. Also, could you try a different font - maybe keep the 'dive' and 'world' the same - possibly even sentence case.
I hope this isn't too much feedback but we really love how you have integrated the diver and the fish and your use of our colours is fantastic.
Hello, thank you for you time on this we really appreciate it. We love #34. A few changes we would like to see:
1. The font is a little thick and we don't like the outline - maybe just a solid font without the outline. and thin it out a bit 2. put the by-line is all upper case 3. use the tan colour somehow as a contrast - to give you an idea the rgb is r135, g105, b73 - not sure how but one of the partners really wants to see this colour included for contrast. 4. An idea - maybe start with the dark blue at the top and fade down to the aqua at the bottom, then make the ray tan. Does that make sense?
#51 looks fantastic. This is really going to be a difficult decision and we may extend for a few day to help us decide. We would love to be able to take 2 designs!
Our only comments are this:
1. the diver seems to be upside down - could you possibly make him look more 'right way up'? Does that make sense? So he still needs to be horizontal. 2. we would also like to see how it would look if the ray in #51 was tan. Keep the diver in blue.