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Instead of "disrupting education" I want it to say "DisruptEd"
Ed stands for education.
Remove the whole word education beneath it. The word "disrupt" in navy blue, the word "Ed" in gray. So it appears as one word "disrupted" but it looks like two cause of the different font colors
also as "disruptED", and could we see what it would look like if the apple was turned into like an apple-shaped message bubble- basically attaching a gray triangle coming off of the left part of the bottom gray section?
Look Great! we are getting really close. We really would like to emphasize the collaboration and sharing of ideas- could we see something that had another apple-shaped message bubble or two kind of faded behind the first one so it's multiple message bubbles that get across the concept of sharing ideas?
we really like your work- my boss wants to see a different concept though- is there a way i can send you a photo file to get a feel for what we are talking about?
Could you do some with disrupt ed in the pencil with different background colors for the pencil and some where it has a broken pencil above the fontblock
I like #189's direction- the others stayed too close to my low-quality attempt at showing what I had in mind.
I've added another picture to dropbox, i think this one is much closer to what I was picturing in my head- if you could kind of stick to this idea but feel free to take some creative liberty to make it look crisper and higher quality that would be great!
Hmm..these just look way too cartoonish compared to what I had in mind- almost like a south park animation. I like some of the different layout concepts but could you try making them look more high-quality/ modern and less south park?
-With this one if you could turn the 3 pink icons into message bubbles that are blue-green- same color palette as the apple designs and turn the pencil on its sign with "disruptED" beneath the logo
a couple of edits: on #200 could you change the little squares to binary code: (0's and 1's) on #199 could you try moving the triangles coming out of the message boxes to the far right side instead of the left, also do one where you just move the purple ones message triangle to the right and leave the blue and green in the same place
For all of them- change the "disrupt" to lower case and the "ED" to uppercase- we're also interested in seeing a few different fonts possibly but that are close to this one- a little less future-y and a little more crisp and refined