Dirty South BatsLogo Design Contest

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i try with stars on the sides of the tagline

got it. Looks good.

i try another tweak using the 28 days later font. please check this update

got it thanks.

also please check this update on black background

update

got it, will be back with update shortly

also maybe shrink the state by 10%.

i think the change in the stripes helps this design. can you add more color i.e. have less stripe in the lower left portion of the D. this will make it more legible as the letter D

ok, i will show you update shortly

this mainly related to the black and gold. your black stripes went all the way through the letter from left to right i.e. 100%. I was saying maybe only go random lengths and not all the way through the letters. does that make sense?

Iam not sure that i get the message about haphazard stripes and coming from both sides, would be very helpful if you can show some link of references about this.

Hi Dirtysouth,
Thank you for more feedback and adding me to the top 5. will keep trying with my entries and submit very soon.

Kindest Regards
Medi

I have put you in the top 5 for your willingness to work. can you keep on grinding in the same format. we like what you have done, but we do not think the stripe needs to go across the full letter. we think it needs to be haphazard and end in the middle, 1/3 2/3 and coming from both sides. the stars work for the red white and blue but i dont think they work for the black/gold. let me know if any questions

ok

thanks. i will get feedback.

update

update

please check this update

Thank you for your feedback, i will try that and submit very soon

this is cool. maybe a little too much like tiger stripes. do you think it could work better if the stripes haphazardly ended within the letters to where you do not have a complete solid black line from left to right?