NICE. Let's make it a pure BLACK, instead of the warm grey. Then we'll see if DIRECT should be red, the "to DEVICE" in black. Try making the "TO" a lower case "to". Great work!
Solid. Let's try 2 iterations on this:
1. Text to the side, stacked
2. The red square being the dot in the 'i' of DIRECT.
3. Close up the D, make the arrow RED.
Let's try a different treatment on the arrow, too...maybe that can stand out a bit more. There's some very interesting negative space to this. So, please try different combinations of fill-ins, maybe a bounding box behind it, etc.
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Then try that treatment with DEVICE as the RED color.
Excellent persistence, Mr_Do. Much appreciated!
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Just uploaded some more iterations.
Gary
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Then with with that change, please play with the red and black on the text.
Also, let's see the Mark in Black as well.
You're at a place where you can make iterations on the type size and the color combinations. Really strong work, Mr_Do! We're rooting for you.
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Also, try different color combinations with the mark. We're liking this one...
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1. Text to the side, stacked
2. The red square being the dot in the 'i' of DIRECT.
3. Close up the D, make the arrow RED.
Thanks, Mr_Do! Good stuff, and keep 'em coming...
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I’ll try some type treatments
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