Detroit Life Design GroupLogo Design Contest

kindly check entry #135 for the revision.

Ok so this is going in a better direction. Need some versions where you are not fitting the houses inside the circle. Also, make the circle even for this version more like the actual sculpture. There is a break at the top of it if you google pics of it. Its just that it is a little difficult to make out the houses here inside the circle because the lines are bleeding into each other a little. Maybe you can make the sketch of the houses with more fine lines? Keep at it. THanks

ok I will check today. Thank you

Hi ryankuhlman,

thanks for the feedback in design proposal and I made the revision you asked on the design, kindly check entries #27 and #28 for the variation. hope to hear from you again.


cheers

-Jjef

I like the simplicity of it. Maybe try some versions with the big circle being the sculpture for the Labor Movement in Detroit. I like the font! Also, try some versions incorporating a house or houses or a neighborhood to communicate this is residential real estate. Dont pay attention to the ranking of 6th as I dont really have them ranked right now in order of what I like as I am asking for more versions and updates. you are in the running...just give me more versions based upon my suggestions. Thanks