Try making the circle Sculpture a little bit thinner. Then try another version where the circle comes to the end of the word Life and beginning of the word Detroit. So you could also try making it a little larger in circumference but keeping the lines of it more thin. Thanks
Ok so please make the circle about 10% smaller than it is now. It would still be just slightly bigger than the other letters. Also, try a couple versions of putting a sort of roof /\ over the top of this so that the entire logo is under a roof of a house so that people get the idea that this is residential real estate. Thanks
This is cool! Now need some versions of this. Make the house more prevalent. The house could be bigger than the circle, as the circle would be inside the house. Also, can do versions where you have the circle bigger than the house like you have it now. Thanks
I just need you to expand on this. It is different than your other design, but it is interesting. Incorporate some of what I had said for the other logo. Residential, a house or houses. Make the Labor Movement sculpture more defined as well. Thanks
I like how clean this is, but need a few changes. First, to make the circle that is serving as the letter "O" to be just a little bit smaller so that it is still larger then the rest of the letters and stands out, but not quite as much as you have it now. Also, look at a picture of the Labor Movement Sculpture. It has a break in the top of it so that should be reflected in the logo. Also, make the circle the grey color or even make it the color of the actual sculpture which is silver metallic. The sculpture also has rigged edges to it that should also show in the logo. Last thing....incorporate something that people could see this is a residential real estate company. needs a house, or houses, or neighborhood...something. Come up with a few versions. You are in the running my friend! Nice work. Thanks
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updated as your request,
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please let me know if you need any change or revision, happy to work with you.
thanks.
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i will send the others as soon as possible.
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