Ok so this is cool. A few things. The fist needs to be more defined like the actual monument. Same with the circle that needs to reflect more of the actual monument for the Labor Movement. Lastly, the houses below are too centered or something...they look more like row houses in rent controlled neighborhoods. Also, try to do this without fashioning it in a circle overall. Thanks
Ok so I like the incorporation of the fist. However, the fist needs to be more like the actual sculpture...more defined. Also, try some versions from the side view as the fist is not pointed directly in front. Play around with some different fonts and play up the houses you have at the bottom. Thanks
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