Interesting! I like the idea. Just a few things. First, the company is Detroit Life Design Group, so please include all the words. Then make the letter D that is inside the picture more defined as the lines are more like a fat marker than a pen. Make the circle at the top more like the actual monument. It is silver metallic and has a break in the top of it. Please refer to the pic i have uploaded. Then do a few versions with incorporating a house, or the outline, or partial outline of a house instead of putting the window inside the DL. I like this version but want to see more choices with both concepts. Thanks
Try making the circle at the top more like the actual sculpture.The sculpture is metallic silver and there is a break at the top of it. Take out the sun above the house. Make the two small roofs the same color as the larger house.
Very interesting! I like this as a start. Needs a few things. First, needs to have something here to communicate that we are a real estate company that provides home ownership opportunities. Maybe incorporate a house or something. I would also like to see a few versions of you using the Labor Movement Monument instead of the Joe Luis monument with the fist. I like the fist, and want versions of that but want to see what else you can do. Thanks
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