Thanks so much for your submission.
Both are simple and clean designs, I would prefer something more edgy and youthful...
With Reference to #12: I am not a fan of the yellow colour...
Feel free to add your flare and be playful with your design...I am looking forward to viewing what you can come up with along those lines...that would more show the youthful and focus aspects of our initiative, that involves developing our ideas, passions and interests into business ventures motivated by our entrepreneurial spirit, desire to succeed and assist and improve people’s lives.