This looks great. I'd like to see a version of it where the line of text (serving the cities of...) is actually a bit larger, and broken into 2 lines of text so it's a little easier to read.
Make it larger, and get to the point where both lines are the exact same length (and scale from the beginning to the end of the left and right sides. Also, please do tha test in black, a slightly lighter version that's a medium gray. Also - try using the font type "Myriad Pro Light", "Open Sans Light" or "Calibri Light" - not bold.
>> Make it larger, and get to the point where both lines are the exact same length (and scale from the beginning to the end of the left and right sides.
What I mean is this:
Serving the beautiful cities of Naples, Bonita Springs, Estero and Cape Coral, Florida
So that both lines are the same length....if possible.